Hallo Franzi,hoffe du hattest heute Unterricht auf Englisch oder Deutsch.Was habt ihr sonst noch unternommen?Ich hatte heute eine sagenhafte Beschäftigung,dreimal darfst du raten...ich bin gespannt, ob du es herausfindest.Hier passiert rein gar nichts,es ist langweilig ohne dich. Viele Grüße an Deimante und ihre Eltern,sind die Gastgeschenke eigentlich gut angekommen? Viel Spaß weiterhin wünschen Papa und Mama.Viele Grüße auch von Oma Mariechen. --
Hi Franzi, I hope you had lessons in English or in German today. What else have you been doing? I had a fabulous occupation today. You are allowed three guesses... I wonder if you can find out what it was. Nothing is going on here. It is boring without you. Give my greetings to Deimante and her parents. Did the hosts like the gifts? Mum and Dad hope you keep having a good time. Also love from grandma Mariechen.
Ostatnio zatwierdzony albo edytowany przez Francky5591 - 3 Maj 2009 18:10
There are some weird lines here, let's try to make it more natural in English...
I think "I trust you had..." could be: "I hope/think/imagine/believe..."
undertaken ---> been doing
legendary?
You can guess three times ---> You have three chances to guess...
Remember me ---> Give my greetings/best wishes
Were the gifts for the horsts well taken?
Have a good time further on ---> Keep enjoying/having a good time
papa and mamma ---> mum and dad
dreimal darfst du raten = <you are allowed three guesses>
"Viel Spaß weiterhin wünschen Papa und Mama" =<furthermore, Mum and Dad hope you have fun.>
Viele Grüße, maybe better as <many greetings>
Really only issue 2, where one sentence was broken up into 2 and the meaning was why I voted "could be improved".