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Превод - Немски-Английски - Hallo Franzi

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Hallo Franzi
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Предоставено от Francky5591
Език, от който се превежда: Немски

Hallo Franzi,hoffe du hattest heute Unterricht auf Englisch oder Deutsch.Was habt ihr sonst noch unternommen?Ich hatte heute eine sagenhafte Beschäftigung,dreimal darfst du raten...ich bin gespannt, ob du es herausfindest.Hier passiert rein gar nichts,es ist langweilig ohne dich.
Viele Grüße an Deimante und ihre Eltern,sind die Gastgeschenke eigentlich gut angekommen?
Viel Spaß weiterhin wünschen Papa und Mama.Viele Grüße auch von Oma Mariechen.
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Hi Franzi
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Английски

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Желан език: Английски

Hi Franzi,
I hope you had lessons in English or in German today. What else have you been doing? I had a fabulous occupation today. You are allowed three guesses... I wonder if you can find out what it was. Nothing is going on here. It is boring without you. Give my greetings to Deimante and her parents. Did the hosts like the gifts? Mum and Dad hope you keep having a good time. Also love from grandma Mariechen.
За последен път се одобри от Francky5591 - 3 Май 2009 18:10





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1 Май 2009 23:50

lilian canale
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Hi Minny,

There are some weird lines here, let's try to make it more natural in English...

I think "I trust you had..." could be: "I hope/think/imagine/believe..."
undertaken ---> been doing
legendary?
You can guess three times ---> You have three chances to guess...
Remember me ---> Give my greetings/best wishes
Were the gifts for the horsts well taken?
Have a good time further on ---> Keep enjoying/having a good time
papa and mamma ---> mum and dad

1 Май 2009 23:53

Francky5591
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a little typo :

horsts
hosts

2 Май 2009 10:13

Minny
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Hi,
I have changed the text according to you suggestions.
For "sagenhafte Beschäftigung" I do not find better words than "legendary occupation".

2 Май 2009 13:22

lilian canale
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Perhaps Italo or iamfromaustria can help us with that adjective.

Guys?

CC: italo07 iamfromaustria

2 Май 2009 14:01

italo07
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My suggestions:

storming activity
fabulous activity/work/job etc

It must sound a bit ironical.

2 Май 2009 14:06

italo07
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P.S. hoffen ≠ to believe, but to hope

2 Май 2009 19:00

iamfromaustria
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"Fabulous" or maybe "terrific" sounds best to me.

2 Май 2009 19:10

lilian canale
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And what about the rest? Is everything correct?

2 Май 2009 19:28

iamfromaustria
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Yes, except from a minor change I would make: It's not "English and German lessons" but "lessons in English and German".

2 Май 2009 19:44

lilian canale
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Do you mean that the classes are given in English and in German?

2 Май 2009 20:15

iamfromaustria
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Yep, the language the classes are held in, are English and German. Not the subjects.

2 Май 2009 20:35

itsatrap100
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dreimal darfst du raten = <you are allowed three guesses>
"Viel Spaß weiterhin wünschen Papa und Mama" =<furthermore, Mum and Dad hope you have fun.>
Viele Grüße, maybe better as <many greetings>
Really only issue 2, where one sentence was broken up into 2 and the meaning was why I voted "could be improved".

3 Май 2009 18:07

merdogan
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in English and German today....in English OR German today