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Traduction - Espagnol-Anglais - Quiero decirte que te quiero,que seas...

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Quiero decirte que te quiero,que seas...
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Proposé par cherraflor
Langue de départ: Espagnol

Quiero decirte que te quiero, que seas valiente, desde lo más profundo de mi corazón deseo que me lleves contigo para siempre, que compartas el resto de tu vida con la mía, que al fin tus sentimientos cambien y estemos juntos para siempre.


TE ESPERARE SIEMPRE
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Titre
I want to tell you that I love you.
Traduction
Anglais

Traduit par lilian canale
Langue d'arrivée: Anglais

I want to tell you that I love you, for you to be always brave. From the bottom of my heart, I wish you'd take me with you forever, you'd share the rest of your life with mine, I wish your feelings would change at the end and we would be together for ever.

I WILL ALWAYS WAIT FOR YOU.
Dernière édition ou validation par Francky5591 - 30 Septembre 2008 17:14





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30 Septembre 2008 00:20

Una Smith
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The target captures the meaning of the source, but could be made closer in style:

"I WILL WAIT FOR YOU ALWAYS" -- this puts the stress on "always", just as on "siempre"

Each "que" should be translated as "that", and the contractions expanded, to keep the formal style of the source: "I want to tell you that ... that ... that ... that in the end ..."

30 Septembre 2008 00:40

lilian canale
Nombre de messages: 14972
Una, the first "que" is different from the others.
The others are followed by subjunctive as in a wish.
The common verb is "want".
"I want you to take me with you forever"
"I want you to share the rest of your life with mine", etc
I feel using "wish" we render the exact meaning the original has.

30 Septembre 2008 00:41

lilian canale
Nombre de messages: 14972
Oops! forgot to cc you.

CC: Una Smith

30 Septembre 2008 06:30

Una Smith
Nombre de messages: 429
Here is how I would translate the source:

I want to tell you that I love you, that you are brave, from the bottom of my heart I wish that you would take me with you forever, that you would share the rest of your life with mine, that ultimately your feelings change and we are together forever.

After "I wish" the mood is present subjunctive and in the last clause the mood can be expressed without using "would", to convey a lover's hope. Contrast that to the current translation, which conveys a lover's despair. Do you see?

30 Septembre 2008 12:23

lilian canale
Nombre de messages: 14972
She's not telling him that "he is brave". She is asking him to be brave.