Traduzione - Bosniaco-Olandese - Nije ovo moja noc bas mi nista ne ide...

(Ik geef haar een geweer in haar handen maar ze wil niet schieten.. Gooi een fles op de grond, maar hij wil niet barsten..)
Deze twee zinnen moeten anders. Vertaling klopt niet.

"Ik geef haar een geweer in haar hand maar ze wil me niet doden"

"Ze gooit een fles zodat ik me kan snijden wil die niet barsten"

Hoi almerisa
ben je het met Sofija's suggesties eens?
Als je het er niet mee eens bent, kan je dan uitleggen waarom niet?
Dank je wel!

Hoi Marija

Zou jij hier naar willen kijken? Alvast bedankt!


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Hi fikomix,
Could you help me evaluate this translation?
Does the original mean something like this?

This is not my night, nothing is going the way I want it to.. I dance, sing, laugh but all (my) wounds are still open.. I buy a flower for her, but she crushes it (under her foot), she says buy the whole world for me or else I (will) leave you for someone else. I give her a gun in her hands but she won't (doesn't want to) shoot.. Throw a bottle on the ground but it won't burst (shatter)..

Or, according to Sofija, for the last sentences:

I give her a gun in her hands but she won't (doesn't want to) kill me.. She throws a bottle so I can cut myself but it won't burst (shatter)..

Thank you!

CC: fikomix

Hi Lein!
Yes, but Sofija_86 is right.

Hi Lein,

Sorry for the late response.

I see last two sentences are making a problem.
Here they go:
"I give her a gun (rifle) in her hand but she doesn't want to kill me. I throw a bottle to cut myself but it won't shatter (burst)."

I hope I helped...
Greetings to all of you

Thank you all!
I have edited according to your suggestions. Just checking: I throw a bottle, not she, right?

CC: Sofija_86 fikomix