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Translation - Spanish-English - ¿Y en qué pequé, que con la muerte recompensas el amor?

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Category Song - Love / Friendship

Title
¿Y en qué pequé, que con la muerte recompensas el amor?
Text
Submitted by Ariadna
Source language: Spanish Translated by JordiMarine

¿Y en qué pequé, que con la muerte recompensas el amor?

Este es el error. Demasiado te amé.

Ociosos ¿Qué hacéis vosotros ahora? Fulminad hoy en la cabeza al impío.

Haced estragos del ingrato. Tu impune impiedad reirá al ver al fin fulminado algún escollo o algún templo.
Remarks about the translation
Pecar y recompensar pueden estar en segunda forma singular del presente, o primera, segunda o tercera forma singular del presente de subjuntivo.
"Qual que" podría significar también cualquier en lugar de alguno.

Title
And in what did I sin,that with death you reward love?
Translation
English

Translated by Triton21
Target language: English

And in what did I sin,that with death you reward love?

This is the error. I loved you too much.

Idle ones, what do you do now? Today, strike death upon the heads of the ungodly.

Wreak havoc on the ungrateful. Your unpunished godlessness will laugh upon finally seeing some obstacle or temple destroyed.
Remarks about the translation
Or this translation instead:

What sin have I committed, that only through death shall I be rewarded love?

I loved you too much, and that is my fatal mistake.

You, who are idle, what are you doing? Strike death upon the heads of the ungodly today.

Wreak havoc on the ungrateful. Upon finally seeing some obstacle or holy place destroyed, your unpunished godlessness shall go about laughing.
Last validated or edited by lilian canale - 5 April 2008 19:24





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5 April 2008 00:16

paupaudeuva
Number of messages: 2
es una traduccion muy textual o gramatical y el poema pierde la esencia

5 April 2008 01:52

Alessandra87
Number of messages: 47
I agree with you, paupaudeuva!

5 April 2008 02:03

lwdgooner
Number of messages: 7
person above me is right

5 April 2008 11:07

FelizRubi
Number of messages: 2
西语中的“error”并不像英语中的那样常常用于“系统出错”之类的操作失误等等,它更多表示的是人为的错误,和“mistake”贴近;并且“¿Qué hacéis vosotros ahora?”这句话,翻译得也不对,它的意思是“What're you doing?”的意思,因为如果是“what do you do now”的话,是表示这段时间,它会用“¿En qué os meteis ahora?”之类的有明显阶段特征的语句。
其余的都正确。