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Dịch - Arabic-English - ان كنت انت الØب Ùكرامتاً عندي ان ابكي خوÙÙ‹ عليك...Current status Dịch
Nhóm chuyên mục Word - Love / Friendship | ان كنت انت الØب Ùكرامتاً عندي ان ابكي خوÙÙ‹ عليك... | | Source language: Arabic
إن كنت أنت الØب Ùكرامتاً عندي
أن أبكي خوÙÙ‹ عليك Ùتدوم دمعاتÙ
أن تنسي من دونك Ø´Ùتي بسماتÙ
أن تبقي أنت الØب وإن كان ÙÙŠ Øبك ممات٠|
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| If you were the love then I'm honored...to.. | DịchEnglish
Translated by  jaq84 | Target language: English
If you were the love then it's an honor
For me to worry about you and cry everlasting tears;
For my lips to stop laughing without you near;
To keep you the Love, and death I shall not fear
| Remarks about the translation | Well, I've tried to keep the rhythm in that and not translate it litterally. But here is an alternative one:
If you were the love then it is an honor
For me to cry of worry about you, tears that would last forever
That my lips ,without you, forget my laughter
To keep you the love, even if in your love death awaits for me
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As for saying "The love" I think it may be substituted with "My love". that makes sense
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28 Tháng 12 2008 18:15 | | 
jaq84Tổng số bài gửi: 568 | Oh... I'm sorry for the typo  | | |
28 Tháng 12 2008 18:30 | | | أعتقد انه لم يترجمها الترجمة المثالية..
أعتقد أن هناك ترجمة Ø£Ùضل | | |
28 Tháng 12 2008 20:48 | | | first many spelling errors; كرامتا، خوÙØŒ دمعات، ممات، .
the Arabic text is very weak.
In addition the two lines "If you were the love then it's an honor
For me to worry about you and cry everlasting tears" should be read as one sentence, the translator out them as two separate sentences. | | |
28 Tháng 12 2008 21:11 | |
jaq84Tổng số bài gửi: 568 | Ok...So here is what I thought Atefsharia...
If I said:
"If you were the love then it's an honor for me" and put them in one sentence like you suggested, then I'll have to repeat the "honor" word with each of the remaining lines. But this way, I have managed to show, like it is in the text, that the honor comes of doing all that (the worry and crying, forgetting the laughter, keeping the love) without having to repeat the word "honor" or honored with each line (especially with the 3rd line). | | |
29 Tháng 12 2008 20:22 | | | | | |
29 Tháng 12 2008 20:26 | |
jaq84Tổng số bài gửi: 568 | Thanx  |
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