Превод - Китайски Опростен-Английски - 上校两眼一瞪，冷冷道...

well i think it's mostly like a word-to-word translate.

This is very close to what I eventually translated it as. I would consider it an acceptable translation.

See the following.

The sect leader's two eyes stared coldly, "Fine! Now that you have a man you have no regard for me. Allow me to skin him alive. Then I will tie you up in bed and I guarantee that it'll be so good that you'll feel like dying and won't think of anyone else."