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The Star Zoo

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yalcin2ea

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Nothing ever happens on Just Like Home- that's the name of the planet I live on. I get so bored!

But tonight was Remembering Night and that's exciting.There's the big fire where everybody must put on something that they love and watch it burn.Then there's the dancing raund the fire.
But what I like best about Remembering Night are the clothes...

12 Март 2010 09:14

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		4 Март 2010 11:28
	Francky5591 Общо мнения: 12396	It seems there are a few edits to be done on this text for it to be understandable : - Line 1 : "planaded" does not exist in English - Line 2 : "dancing raund" does not make sense. - Line 3 : "i" is not a word in English, it is the 9th letter from the Latin alphabet but it has no meaning at all in English. So please yalcin2ea, edit your text if you want it to be translated, as it is in stand-by at the moment, and it is waiting for your edits. Thanks, best regards, CC: lilian canale
		4 Март 2010 11:53
	lilian canale Общо мнения: 14972	Hi Francky, I think this user does nor understand English very well, so I'll ask someone to explain in Turkish that he must check his request Sunny, would you please? CC: Sunnybebek
		4 Март 2010 12:43
	Sunnybebek Общо мнения: 758	Yes, sure Lilly! Merhaba yalcin2ea! Metninizde hatalar var: 1 "planaded" - Ä°ngilizce dilinde bu sÃ¶z yok. 2 "dancing raund" cÃ¼mlenin anlamÄ± yok. 3 Ä°ngilizce dilinde "i" bir sÃ¶z yok, "I" sÃ¶z var. LÃ¼tfen, metninizi kontrol edin!