Translation - Turks-Engels - AÅŸkÄ±nla Beni Ã–ldÃ¼rdÃ¼n

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Title

AÅŸkÄ±nla Beni Ã–ldÃ¼rdÃ¼n

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payekhali

Source language: Turks

AÅŸkÄ±nla beni Ã¶ldÃ¼rdÃ¼n
Alemi bana gÃ¼ldÃ¼rdÃ¼n
Bana vermediÄŸin o zalim kalbini
SÃ¶yle ellere kaÃ§ paraya verdin

Ã‡alÄ±nsÄ±n sazlar gÃ¶nÃ¼l eÄŸlensin
Bize deÄŸmeyenler bin yaÅŸasÄ±n

Gelin gidelim mutlu kalalÄ±m
Sanma ki saadet cepte paradÄ±r
Beni kÃ¼Ã§Ã¼k gÃ¶rÃ¼p aleme kaÃ§tÄ±n
Elbet bu gidiÅŸin dÃ¶nÃ¼ÅŸÃ¼ vardÄ±r

Title	You have killed me with your love
Translation Engels Translated by onurkayabasi	Target language: Engels You have killed me with your love You made people laugh at me Tell me, how much money did you get from strangers By giving your cruel heart, you didn't give me? Let the reeds play, let the heart enjoy Let the ones that do not hurt us live Come on! Let's always stay happy Don't think that happiness is the money in the pocket You have patronized me and ran away to other people Of course, there is a return of this going
Remarks about the translation	"bin yaÅŸamak" is a phrase and i couldn't find the exact translation of it. And in other parts i tried not to change the meaning

Laaste geakkrediteerde redigering deur lilian canale

- 5 April 2011 02:16

Last messages

	Author	Message
		24 February 2011 12:34
	Tantine Number of messages: 2747	Hi onurkayabasi, Your translation has several differences with the French version. Can you re read it and try and eliminate the mistakes? Poetry is extremely difficult to translate, so if needs be use poetic license and convey the meaning rather than the words themselves. Bises Tantine
		24 February 2011 16:28
	onurkayabasi Number of messages: 3	Hi Tantine, I don't know French and i used the Turkish version to translate into English. I'm so sorry about that. You're absolutely right actually, translating a poetry into another language may make poetry lose its meaning, and translating a translated version of poetry may cause double lose.
		24 February 2011 19:20
	Bilge Ertan Number of messages: 921	Hi all Tantine, who translated this text into French is me but Francky made lots of corrections to make it sound more natural in French and we expressly marked it as "Meaning only". So, I can say that onurkayabasi's translation is closer to the meaning of the Turkish text than its French version. I just would like to add a few things. First, this sentence should be changed: -Let the ones that do not touch us live. The verb used in the Turkish text is "to touch" but it has a figurative meaning, so we'd better change it like this: - Let the ones who don't hurt us live. Also, - Of course, there is a return of this (means your) going - Come on, let's go, let's stay happy. Except these things, his translation fits the Turkish text. Hope my explanations are helpful
		3 April 2011 03:12
	itsatrap100 Number of messages: 279	Hi, There are some major meaning differences between the French and English text, but I suppose the general idea is expressed.
		3 April 2011 13:10
	merdogan Number of messages: 3769	- - Tell me, how much money did you get from strangers By giving your cruel heart, you didn't give me? ...> - - By giving your cruel heart, you didn't give me. Tell me, how much money did you get from strangers?
		4 April 2011 15:12
	nhendi Number of messages: 16	Il ya un manque: Dis-moi, pour combien d'argent as-tu offert aux autres EN OFFRANT TON COEUR CREUL QUE TU NE M'AS PAS DONNE