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Is this translation OK?

CC: drkpp

Yes, the translation was OK.
Thank you!

Perhps it's simply misspelling but it should be parh sakte and not par sakte

It's the English translation I would like your opinion on, onlooker, not the original text.

CC: onlooker

sorry yes, i believe it's correct

OK; thanks.

Improvised Translation:
अब बोलते क्यूँ नहीं
क्या करूँ
क्या तुम्हें हिंदी पढनी आती हैं
कॉपी और पेस्ट करो

Since copy & paste are the commands I have kept them as such. Only transliteration is done.

1) I cannot read your message.

2) I don't know why it was posted. Do you want me to change the accepted translation?