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翻译 - 土耳其语-英语 - Bir Åžey Var Aramızda当前状态 翻译
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讨论区 诗歌 | | | 源语言: 土耳其语
Birşey var aramızda
Senin bakışlarından belli
Benim yanan yüzümden
Dalıveriyoruz arada bir
İkimizde aynı şeyi düşünüyoruz belki
Gülüşerek başlıyoruz söze
Birşey var aramızda
Onu buldukça kaybediyoruz isteyerek
Fakat ne kadar saklasak nafile
Birşey var aramızda
Senin gözlerin ışıldıyor
Benimse dilimin ucunda
Nahit Ulvi Akgün | | ingiliz lehçesinde Nahit Ulvi Akgün'ünün bir şiirinin çevrilmesini istemekteyim. |
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There is something between us
Obvious from your looks
From my blazing face
We are lost in thoughts now and then
Both thinking the same thing maybe
We begin to talk laughing together
There is something between us
We lose it willingly as we find it
No matter how hard we try to hide it
There is something between us
Your eyes are gleaming
And it is on the tip of my tongue
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2008年 六月 6日 03:48 | | | | | |
2008年 六月 7日 13:55 | | | Ohh my!! I am late  | | |
2008年 六月 11日 15:28 | | | Hi serba, good job.
There's only one line that puzzled me.
"But it is all vain howlong we hide it"
I didn't get that "howlong". | | |
2008年 六月 11日 15:32 | | | | | |
2008年 六月 11日 15:44 | | | Well...that would be a better spelling, still...I don't understand the meaning. Could you explain in other words?  | | |
2008年 六月 11日 16:22 | | | "it is all vain how much we hide it "
I think it should be like this. | | |
2008年 六月 11日 16:29 | | |
in the meaning conecting to whole text:
it is all useless how much we try to hide it to love each other | | |
2008年 六月 11日 16:41 | | | Could it mean:
"it's all vain we hide it so much"? | | |
2008年 六月 11日 17:08 | | | "it is all vain how much we hide it
what is wrong with this sentence? | | |
2008年 六月 11日 17:55 | | | That "how much" sounds wrong, serba.
What I understand is that they hid strongly what they feel, but it was in vain. It's not worth hiding it.
Am I wrong? | | |
2008年 六月 12日 06:59 | | | what ever they try to hide it it is obvious that they love each other.
this is the meaning. | | |
2008年 六月 12日 07:17 | | | But it is all vain how hard we hide it
I changed it like this.how is it now? | | |
2008年 六月 12日 17:20 | | | Well, let's see possible sentences that match the meaning and sound natural in English, OK?
- But we can hardly hide it
- But we uselessly try to hide it
- But it's useless trying to hide it
- But we try in vain to hide it
- Even trying hard to hide it, it's in vain
- No matter how hard we try to hide it (it's in vain)
I think you can take your choice  | | |
2008年 六月 13日 07:09 | | | ok thanks I have chosen one. | | |
2008年 六月 13日 19:51 | | | merhaba serba,
nice translation,
just 'maybe' is one word here,
gazes, looks instead of lookings
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