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翻訳 - フランス語-英語 - Mon géniteur. La tête se déchire Le cÅ“ur cogne ...現状 翻訳
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カテゴリ 自由な執筆  この翻訳依頼は意味だけで結構です。 | Mon géniteur. La tête se déchire Le cÅ“ur cogne ... | | 原稿の言語: フランス語
Mon géniteur.
La tête se déchire
Le cœur cogne
Tu as sans vergogne
pris ma liberté.
Tu fus mon père
Tu es parti
mais la douleur reste encore
me privant, à jamais, de ma sérénité.
J'étais un enfant
sans défense
L'enfant a grandit
sans avoir comprit
Tu m'as imploré mon pardon
que je ne pouvais te donner
Tu es parti sans,
et moi, je reste,
les ailes brisées à jamais.
Tu es parti
sans que j'ai pu te dire
que le père que tu fus avant
me manque et que je l'aime
Maintenant les larmes peuvent enfin couler. | | I would like if Lilian would accept to translate these words for me, although she is overworked,
but I'm not in a hurry. |
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My genitor.
The head tears
The heart pounds
You have, shamelessly
taken my freedom.
You were my father
You are gone
but the pain still remains
depriving me, forever, of my serenity.
I was a child
defenseless
The child has grown up
unable to understand
You've begged my pardon
which I couldn't give you
You left without,
and I remain,
wings broken forever.
You're gone
and I could not tell you
that I miss the father you were before
and that I love him
Now the tears can finally flow |
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最終承認・編集者 Bamsa - 2009年 9月 29日 08:39
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2009年 9月 28日 01:01 | | | I hope you are not disappointed, Lene 
I did my best. | | |
2009年 9月 28日 01:09 | | | | | |
2009年 9月 28日 01:13 | | | Oh, thanks, dear Lene.  I'm glad you liked my version, I didn't try to get any rhyme since deep feelings don't need to rhyme, just to be honestly expressed.
That's a beautiful poem.  | | |
2009年 9月 28日 01:28 | | | | | |
2009年 9月 28日 09:12 | | | Fine, but excuse me, isn't possible to translate "géniteur" into english.
Il y a là comme un sens second, à ne pas vouloir dire "mon père" comme pour lui dénier ce rôle 
Bonne semaine à toutes et tous | | |
2009年 9月 28日 15:17 | | | Yes, Burduff, of course you're right, but it just that I didn't want to discuss this translation too
much, and I really find Lilian's translation perfect. But of course we could translate this word "géniteur" into English, perhaps "procreator".
Can you do it, Lilian, please. And thanks again.
CC: Burduf | | |
2009年 9月 28日 15:40 | | | Beautiful poem and excellent translation! I was moved so much... | | |
2009年 9月 28日 15:48 | | | Thanks little one.  And as you say: excellent
translation.  | | |
2009年 9月 28日 16:11 | | | Actually I was in doubt about whether I should translate "géniteur" as "genitor", which even being the scientific noun for parent, it establishes a distance, a lack of affection in the relationship.
If that is what you meant, Lene, I'll edit. | | |
2009年 9月 28日 23:14 | | | Well, it's quite funny, Lilian, because I didn't know it myself, before Burduff spoke about it, and I realised that, actually, he was right. So, yes, please, if you could correct it to genitor it would be fine. And one more time, thanks so much, dear Lilian. CC: Burduf |
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Joking. Now I'll go to bed . Enjoy your evening. And thanks for your big heart. 
