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Translation - German-English - Sie haben sich fÃ¼r den kostenlosen...

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Title	Sie haben sich fÃ¼r den kostenlosen...
Text Submitted by shefi24sk	Source language: German Sie haben sich fÃ¼r den kostenlosen E-Mail-Newsletter "Naturmedizin aktuell" angemeldet. Damit wir mit der kostenlosen Belieferung beginnen kÃ¶nnen, bitten wir Sie nun noch, Ihren Auftrag zu bestÃ¤tigen.

Title	They have logged themselves in for the free...
Translation English Translated by gamine	Target language: English You have registered for the free e-mail newsletter "Natural modern medicine". In order for us to proceed, we ask you to confirm your order.
Remarks about the translation	Natural modern medicine or: current natural medicine

Validated by Lein - 8 January 2010 13:43

Last messages

	Author	Message
		7 January 2010 14:57
	Lein Number of messages: 3389	Hi Gamine 'Sie' is used as the polite form of (singular) you here. I saw you translated it this way in the last sentence, but the first one says 'they' instead My suggestion: You have registered for the free electronic newsletter "Naturmedizin aktuell" (or your translation which is fine). In order for us to start sending it, free, we ask you to confirm your order. What do you think? I am not completely happy with 'start sending it', but I think 'supply' is not the best word here either. Once I have started a poll we can see if anyone else has a suggestion
		7 January 2010 18:07
	gamine Number of messages: 4611	Hi Lein. I have edited the last line as you suggested. Find it much better. Couldn't we use:"proceed" here instead of "supply" or "start sending it"?
		7 January 2010 19:53
	Lein Number of messages: 3389	Yes, that's a good suggestion! I have edited. I have also removed 'free' because I think the first sentence makes it clear already that the newsletter will be free. Let me know if you don't agree!
		7 January 2010 20:09
	gamine Number of messages: 4611	Of course, I do , dear Lein. You're completely right. Thanks for your help.
		8 January 2010 00:18
	gbernsdorff Number of messages: 240	current natural medicine ?
		8 January 2010 12:06
	Delfin71 Number of messages: 15	They have currently signed up for free e-mail newsletter, "Natural Medicine". Before we can start with the free supply, please confirm your order.