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Translation - German-English - Sie haben sich für den kostenlosen...

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Sie haben sich für den kostenlosen...
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Submitted by shefi24sk
Source language: German

Sie haben sich für den kostenlosen E-Mail-Newsletter "Naturmedizin aktuell" angemeldet.
Damit wir mit der kostenlosen Belieferung beginnen können,
bitten wir Sie nun noch, Ihren Auftrag zu bestätigen.

Title
They have logged themselves in for the free...
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English

Translated by gamine
Target language: English

You have registered for the free e-mail
newsletter "Natural modern medicine".
In order for us to proceed, we ask you to confirm your order.
Remarks about the translation
Natural modern medicine or: current natural medicine
Validated by Lein - 8 January 2010 13:43





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7 January 2010 14:57

Lein
Number of messages: 3389
Hi Gamine

'Sie' is used as the polite form of (singular) you here. I saw you translated it this way in the last sentence, but the first one says 'they' instead

My suggestion:

You have registered for the free electronic newsletter "Naturmedizin aktuell" (or your translation which is fine).
In order for us to start sending it, free, we ask you to confirm your order.

What do you think?
I am not completely happy with 'start sending it', but I think 'supply' is not the best word here either. Once I have started a poll we can see if anyone else has a suggestion

7 January 2010 18:07

gamine
Number of messages: 4611
Hi Lein. I have edited the last line as you suggested. Find it much better.

Couldn't we use:"proceed" here instead of "supply" or "start sending it"?

7 January 2010 19:53

Lein
Number of messages: 3389
Yes, that's a good suggestion! I have edited. I have also removed 'free' because I think the first sentence makes it clear already that the newsletter will be free. Let me know if you don't agree!

7 January 2010 20:09

gamine
Number of messages: 4611
Of course, I do , dear Lein. You're completely right.
Thanks for your help.

8 January 2010 00:18

gbernsdorff
Number of messages: 240
current natural medicine ?

8 January 2010 12:06

Delfin71
Number of messages: 15
They have currently signed up for free e-mail newsletter, "Natural Medicine".
Before we can start with the free supply,
please confirm your order.