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Translation - Croatian-French - Pogledom

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This text is available in the following languages:

Croatian

French

Category Free writing

This translation request is "Meaning only".

Title	Pogledom
Text Submitted by Mady75	Source language: Croatian Pogledom me skini strasno u tisini,neka zatreperim ko list na vjetru.Na jastuke me stavi,rukama obavi,mazi me jos tiho u noc
Remarks about the translation	J'ai recu ce texte en mail de quelqu un que je suis supposee connaitre, on m a dit que c etait du croate mais je n en sais pas plus. Merci pour votre aide

Title	Avec le regard
Translation French Translated by pmusic	Target language: French Avec le regard dÃ©shabille-moi doucement dans le silence, que je sois emportÃ© comme une feuille dans le vent. Sur les coussins dÃ©pose-moi, avec tes mains devine-moi, caresse-moi encore en silence dans la nuit
Remarks about the translation	Bonjour, Le texte que tu as reÃ§u est un poÃ¨me... C'est pour cela que je me suis permis de le traduire dans le sens et l'esprit du thÃ¨me, plutÃ´t que vÃ©ritablement littÃ©ralement... Dans tous les cas, chÃ¨re "Mady75" (oui, je dis "chÃ¨re" car aprÃ¨s avoir traduit pour toi d'aussi jolies paroles, nous sommes maintenant un peu intimes... :o)), c'est qq'un qui t'a fait une trÃ¨s jolie dÃ©claration... Cordialement Pascal

Validated by Francky5591

- 10 July 2007 17:29

Last messages

	Author	Message
		10 July 2007 17:14
	Maski Number of messages: 326	Well he uses "doucement" which should mean "gently", when the original word is "passionately", "emportÃ©" means to "carry off" and the original is "tremble". BUT - this a poem kind of, so whatever sounds better in French should be used, i don't think it needs to be direct translation. "devine-moi" is a phrase I'm not familiar with, but if it's something like "hold me" or "encircle me" (very direct translation) than it's ok, and the last part sounds better in French than in original so i'd let it be. CC: Francky5591
		10 July 2007 17:34
	Francky5591 Number of messages: 12396	I agree with your comments, I also think poetic texts don't have to be literaly translated, especially when the meaning is saved and enlightened with better formulations...