Vertimas - Kroatų-Prancūzų - Pogledom

Well he uses "doucement" which should mean "gently", when the original word is "passionately", "emporté" means to "carry off" and the original is "tremble".
BUT - this a poem kind of, so whatever sounds better in French should be used, i don't think it needs to be direct translation.
"devine-moi" is a phrase I'm not familiar with, but if it's something like "hold me" or "encircle me" (very direct translation) than it's ok, and the last part sounds better in French than in original so i'd let it be.



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I agree with your comments, I also think poetic texts don't have to be literaly translated, especially when the meaning is saved and enlightened with better formulations...