Vertaling - Engels-Arabisch - I love HimI love his mother and ...

Hello Lilian
"...that he choosed me"!!
In the last line.

CC: lilian canale

Plus, the header says:
"....I love your mother and your father".
But in the tsxt body we read:
"I love his mother and your father..."
which doesn't make sense.

Thanks jaq, fixed

احبه
احب امه و ابوه لانهم جاؤوا بهذا الفتى الجميل للحياه و امكنني لقائه.
احب حقيقه مجيئه الى السويد.
احب اصدقائي لانهم يعرفونه و عرفوني به.
احب الله لانه ارشدني اليه.

احبه للابد, اريد ان اكون معه للابد او اكثر(ان كان ممكنا).
احبه حتى اكثر من الحياه نفسها.
من شدة جماله لا استطيع ان اصدق انه اختارني!

Hi guys! Good day to you all
Jaq made a very nice editing to my Arabic translation for this text. For me, looks better now.
Well done Jaq!

Hello Ghassan
Your translation was good. In fact, I have to admit that I like your translations in general.
The point I was trying make is that we should stick to the written text as much as possible. For example, when you translated it you dropped "...this beautiful boy...".
Second, you said "من كثر جماله" which sounded a bit like informal Arabic. Because in plain Arabic we say "من شدة جماله".
Since you have agreed to my suggested translation, I have edited the text and I'm ready now to accept it.
Well done Ghassan

Hi there!
Thanks a lot.