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Titull	Herbe douce
Tekst Prezantuar nga La fourmi autodidacte	gjuha e tekstit origjinal: Frengjisht Herbe douce. Ã€ son huitiÃ¨me jour Bergeronnette la bien nommÃ©e. Ã€ sa huitiÃ¨me annÃ©e Bergeronnette la bien aimÃ©e, Sur un tronc sa tÃªte Ã©clatÃ©e . AprÃ¨s huit annÃ©es Bergeronnette, Ton bourreau prisonnier, sa tÃªte purifiÃ©e. Paroles avouÃ©es, libertÃ© affirmÃ©e . Dans ton bec Bergeronnette une herbe douce, envolÃ©e
Vërejtje rreth përkthimit	RWANDA : -Gacaca est le nom rwandais pour tribunal communautaire villageois. Gacaca signifie Â« herbe douce Â» en kinyarwanda, câ€™est-Ã -dire l'endroit oÃ¹ l'on se rÃ©unit. -La bergeronnette (totem des Bagesera) bÃ©nÃ©ficie d'une interdiction protectrice. Celui qui la tue, membre ou non du clan correspondant, doit accomplir un certain rite de purification.

Titull	Sweet Grass
Përkthime Anglisht Perkthyer nga babachiko	Përkthe në: Anglisht Sweet grass. On the eighth day Wagtail, the well named. On the eighth year Wagtail, the beloved one, On a trunk its head burst. After eight years, Wagtail, Your henchman gaoled, his head purified. Words admitted, freedom affirmed. In your beak, Wagtail, a sweet grass, flying away

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- 18 Gusht 2009 10:42

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		17 Gusht 2009 10:52
	Francky5591 Numri i postimeve: 12396	Hi babachiko, at line 2 "bien aimÃ©e" in English is not "well named", it rather would be "beloved", (I don't know whether one could say "the well loved", maybe; the expert in English will confirm. Best regards, CC: lilian canale
		17 Gusht 2009 11:08
	babachiko Numri i postimeve: 11	You are right. I read the original text too quickly as "la bien nommÃ©e." For "bien aimÃ©e" I'd suggest "beloved".
		17 Gusht 2009 12:34
	lilian canale Numri i postimeve: 14972	But the first line says: "la bien nommÃ©e"
		17 Gusht 2009 12:37
	Francky5591 Numri i postimeve: 12396	Hehe! you did the same error this time, as 1st line reads "la bien nommÃ©e" ("the well named" Only line 2 was to be edited! Don't worry, I'll do it for you! Have a nice day!
		17 Gusht 2009 12:37
	Francky5591 Numri i postimeve: 12396	Sorry Lilian, I didn't see your post before sending mine!
		17 Gusht 2009 14:10
	babachiko Numri i postimeve: 11	My this is tricky. I should avoid poetry...
		17 Gusht 2009 15:25
	gamine Numri i postimeve: 4611	On a truck its burst head.
		17 Gusht 2009 15:38
	babachiko Numri i postimeve: 11	trunk (or stock)?, but not camion.
		17 Gusht 2009 17:49
	Francky5591 Numri i postimeve: 12396	Lene probably did a typo and typed "truck" instead of "trunk", but what she was meaning is that it has to be "burst head" and not "head burst"
		17 Gusht 2009 20:21
	Chiv Numri i postimeve: 1	Le sens de cette traduction ne me semble pas assez fort + quelques erreurs : Je remplacerais plutÃ´t Sweet grass par soft grass. On the eighth... par At its eighth day... At its eighth YEAR (et non "day" sur la seconde ligne). "On a trunk its burst head" me semble plus correct mais j'avoue avoir un doute sur "burst". Je vois plutÃ´t "Ã©clatÃ©e" dans le sens de broyÃ©e (par quelqu'un), donc Ã©ventuellement "crushed" me semble plus appropriÃ©. "Henchman" n'est pas assez fort ici, je vois le bourreau dans le sens "tueur". "Words acknowledged" n'est peut-Ãªtre pas assez fort non plus, je verrais plus "confessed words". Et Ã nouveau "soft grass" sur la derniÃ¨re ligne.
		17 Gusht 2009 23:30
	gamine Numri i postimeve: 4611	Franck is right. It was a typo. Of course not "truck" but "trunk".
		18 Gusht 2009 07:16
	IanMegill2 Numri i postimeve: 1671	Second line: ...eighth year... Second to last line: Words admitted,... Apart from that, good job with a difficult text!