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Përkthime - Frengjisht-Anglisht - Herbe douce

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Titull
Herbe douce
Tekst
Prezantuar nga La fourmi autodidacte
gjuha e tekstit origjinal: Frengjisht

Herbe douce.
À son huitième jour Bergeronnette la bien nommée.
À sa huitième année Bergeronnette la bien aimée,
Sur un tronc sa tête éclatée .
Après huit années Bergeronnette,
Ton bourreau prisonnier, sa tête purifiée.
Paroles avouées, liberté affirmée .
Dans ton bec Bergeronnette une herbe douce, envolée
Vërejtje rreth përkthimit
RWANDA :
-Gacaca est le nom rwandais pour tribunal communautaire villageois. Gacaca signifie « herbe douce » en kinyarwanda, c’est-à-dire l'endroit où l'on se réunit.
-La bergeronnette (totem des Bagesera) bénéficie d'une interdiction protectrice. Celui qui la tue, membre ou non du clan correspondant, doit accomplir un certain rite de purification.

Titull
Sweet Grass
Përkthime
Anglisht

Perkthyer nga babachiko
Përkthe në: Anglisht

Sweet grass.

On the eighth day Wagtail, the well named.
On the eighth year Wagtail, the beloved one,
On a trunk its head burst.
After eight years, Wagtail,
Your henchman gaoled, his head purified.
Words admitted, freedom affirmed.
In your beak, Wagtail, a sweet grass, flying away
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17 Gusht 2009 10:52

Francky5591
Numri i postimeve: 12396
Hi babachiko, at line 2 "bien aimée" in English is not "well named", it rather would be "beloved", (I don't know whether one could say "the well loved", maybe; the expert in English will confirm.

Best regards,

CC: lilian canale

17 Gusht 2009 11:08

babachiko
Numri i postimeve: 11
You are right. I read the original text too quickly as "la bien nommée." For "bien aimée" I'd suggest "beloved".

17 Gusht 2009 12:34

lilian canale
Numri i postimeve: 14972
But the first line says:
"la bien nommée"

17 Gusht 2009 12:37

Francky5591
Numri i postimeve: 12396
Hehe! you did the same error this time, as 1st line reads "la bien nommée" ("the well named"
Only line 2 was to be edited!

Don't worry, I'll do it for you!

Have a nice day!

17 Gusht 2009 12:37

Francky5591
Numri i postimeve: 12396
Sorry Lilian, I didn't see your post before sending mine!


17 Gusht 2009 14:10

babachiko
Numri i postimeve: 11
My this is tricky. I should avoid poetry...

17 Gusht 2009 15:25

gamine
Numri i postimeve: 4611
On a truck its burst head.

17 Gusht 2009 15:38

babachiko
Numri i postimeve: 11
trunk (or stock)?, but not camion.

17 Gusht 2009 17:49

Francky5591
Numri i postimeve: 12396
Lene probably did a typo and typed "truck" instead of "trunk", but what she was meaning is that it has to be "burst head" and not "head burst"

17 Gusht 2009 20:21

Chiv
Numri i postimeve: 1
Le sens de cette traduction ne me semble pas assez fort + quelques erreurs :
Je remplacerais plutôt Sweet grass par soft grass.
On the eighth... par At its eighth day...
At its eighth YEAR (et non "day" sur la seconde ligne).
"On a trunk its burst head" me semble plus correct mais j'avoue avoir un doute sur "burst". Je vois plutôt "éclatée" dans le sens de broyée (par quelqu'un), donc éventuellement "crushed" me semble plus approprié.
"Henchman" n'est pas assez fort ici, je vois le bourreau dans le sens "tueur".
"Words acknowledged" n'est peut-être pas assez fort non plus, je verrais plus "confessed words".
Et à nouveau "soft grass" sur la dernière ligne.

17 Gusht 2009 23:30

gamine
Numri i postimeve: 4611
Franck is right. It was a typo. Of course not "truck" but "trunk".

18 Gusht 2009 07:16

IanMegill2
Numri i postimeve: 1671
Second line:
...eighth year...

Second to last line:
Words admitted,...

Apart from that, good job with a difficult text!