Vertaling - Frans-Engels - Herbe douce

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Titel	Herbe douce
Tekst Opgestuurd door La fourmi autodidacte	Uitgangs-taal: Frans Herbe douce. Ã€ son huitiÃ¨me jour Bergeronnette la bien nommÃ©e. Ã€ sa huitiÃ¨me annÃ©e Bergeronnette la bien aimÃ©e, Sur un tronc sa tÃªte Ã©clatÃ©e . AprÃ¨s huit annÃ©es Bergeronnette, Ton bourreau prisonnier, sa tÃªte purifiÃ©e. Paroles avouÃ©es, libertÃ© affirmÃ©e . Dans ton bec Bergeronnette une herbe douce, envolÃ©e
Details voor de vertaling	RWANDA : -Gacaca est le nom rwandais pour tribunal communautaire villageois. Gacaca signifie Â« herbe douce Â» en kinyarwanda, câ€™est-Ã -dire l'endroit oÃ¹ l'on se rÃ©unit. -La bergeronnette (totem des Bagesera) bÃ©nÃ©ficie d'une interdiction protectrice. Celui qui la tue, membre ou non du clan correspondant, doit accomplir un certain rite de purification.

Titel	Sweet Grass
Vertaling Engels Vertaald door babachiko	Doel-taal: Engels Sweet grass. On the eighth day Wagtail, the well named. On the eighth year Wagtail, the beloved one, On a trunk its head burst. After eight years, Wagtail, Your henchman gaoled, his head purified. Words admitted, freedom affirmed. In your beak, Wagtail, a sweet grass, flying away

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- 18 augustus 2009 10:42

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		17 augustus 2009 10:52
	Francky5591 Aantal berichten: 12396	Hi babachiko, at line 2 "bien aimÃ©e" in English is not "well named", it rather would be "beloved", (I don't know whether one could say "the well loved", maybe; the expert in English will confirm. Best regards, CC: lilian canale
		17 augustus 2009 11:08
	babachiko Aantal berichten: 11	You are right. I read the original text too quickly as "la bien nommÃ©e." For "bien aimÃ©e" I'd suggest "beloved".
		17 augustus 2009 12:34
	lilian canale Aantal berichten: 14972	But the first line says: "la bien nommÃ©e"
		17 augustus 2009 12:37
	Francky5591 Aantal berichten: 12396	Hehe! you did the same error this time, as 1st line reads "la bien nommÃ©e" ("the well named" Only line 2 was to be edited! Don't worry, I'll do it for you! Have a nice day!
		17 augustus 2009 12:37
	Francky5591 Aantal berichten: 12396	Sorry Lilian, I didn't see your post before sending mine!
		17 augustus 2009 14:10
	babachiko Aantal berichten: 11	My this is tricky. I should avoid poetry...
		17 augustus 2009 15:25
	gamine Aantal berichten: 4611	On a truck its burst head.
		17 augustus 2009 15:38
	babachiko Aantal berichten: 11	trunk (or stock)?, but not camion.
		17 augustus 2009 17:49
	Francky5591 Aantal berichten: 12396	Lene probably did a typo and typed "truck" instead of "trunk", but what she was meaning is that it has to be "burst head" and not "head burst"
		17 augustus 2009 20:21
	Chiv Aantal berichten: 1	Le sens de cette traduction ne me semble pas assez fort + quelques erreurs : Je remplacerais plutÃ´t Sweet grass par soft grass. On the eighth... par At its eighth day... At its eighth YEAR (et non "day" sur la seconde ligne). "On a trunk its burst head" me semble plus correct mais j'avoue avoir un doute sur "burst". Je vois plutÃ´t "Ã©clatÃ©e" dans le sens de broyÃ©e (par quelqu'un), donc Ã©ventuellement "crushed" me semble plus appropriÃ©. "Henchman" n'est pas assez fort ici, je vois le bourreau dans le sens "tueur". "Words acknowledged" n'est peut-Ãªtre pas assez fort non plus, je verrais plus "confessed words". Et Ã nouveau "soft grass" sur la derniÃ¨re ligne.
		17 augustus 2009 23:30
	gamine Aantal berichten: 4611	Franck is right. It was a typo. Of course not "truck" but "trunk".
		18 augustus 2009 07:16
	IanMegill2 Aantal berichten: 1671	Second line: ...eighth year... Second to last line: Words admitted,... Apart from that, good job with a difficult text!