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Tytuł	Monsieur, Nous nous sommes...
Tekst Wprowadzone przez douyÃ¨re	Język źródłowy: Francuski Monsieur, Nous nous sommes rencontrÃ©s au Salon de GenÃ¨ve 2008 et vous avez apprÃ©ciÃ© l'appareil de cardio traÃ®ning que j'ai inventÃ© qui s'appelle le Moulin.Cet appareil est peut Ãªtre le plus efficace Ã ce jour et une mÃ©daille d'or m'a Ã©tÃ© dÃ©cernÃ©e.... Aujourd'hui j'ai dÃ©posÃ© le brevet europÃ©en et la traduction anglaise est en cours! Pouvez vous me dire si vous Ãªtes toujours intÃ©ressÃ© par cet appareil? Si oui,avez-vous dÃ©jÃ pensÃ© Ã une solution commerciale? Veuillez recevoir ,monsieur,l'expression de mes salutations les plus sincÃ¨res.
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Tytuł

The Mill

Tłumaczenie

Angielski

Tłumaczone przez

Urunghai

Język docelowy: Angielski

Sir,
We met on the Geneva Show 2008 and you expressed interest in the cardiotraining device I have invented called the Mill. This device is perhaps the most effective nowadays and I have been awarded a gold medal...
Today I have registered the European licence and the English translation is on its way!
Could you please tell me if you are still interested in this device?! If so, have you already thought of a commercial solution?
Yours faithfully.

Ostatnio zatwierdzony albo edytowany przez lilian canale

- 9 Czerwiec 2008 17:21

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		9 Czerwiec 2008 01:39
	lilian canale Liczba postów: 14972	H i Urunghai, I've made a few adjustments in the first paragraph and set a poll, I hope you agree. before edits: We have met in the GenÃ¨ve Salon 2008 and you have appreciated the cardiotraining device I have invented called the Mill. This device maybe is the most efficient one around these days and I have already been presented a golden medal.
		9 Czerwiec 2008 03:59
	turkishmiss Liczba postów: 2132	Salon de GenÃ©ve = Geneva Show
		9 Czerwiec 2008 10:43
	IanMegill2 Liczba postów: 1671	I would translate ...vous avez apprÃ©ciÃ©... as: ...you expressed interest in... I think ...you (have) appreciated... (please note: the French "passÃ© composÃ©" is usually translated with the English simple past) in English is too strong, it indicates a gratitude that is not there in the French. Apart from that, the translation is fine!
		9 Czerwiec 2008 11:25
	Lein Liczba postów: 3389	I think 'effective' is a more accurate translation than 'efficient'. Otherwise a great translation!
		9 Czerwiec 2008 11:33
	MÃ¥ddie Liczba postów: 1285	Hello, "Veuillez recevoir ,monsieur,l'expression de mes salutations les plus sincÃ¨res." == "Yours faithfully?" I know the meaning is the same, but still... Madeleine
		9 Czerwiec 2008 17:08
	Urunghai Liczba postów: 464	Well I completely agree wtih all of you so let me edit. (Always nice to see so many views on a translation from so many people!) I know what you mean, Madeleine, but the French like to exagerate when it comes to formality in letters
		9 Czerwiec 2008 17:12
	MÃ¥ddie Liczba postów: 1285	That's why my vote was + Have a nice day! Madeleine