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Titolo	Monsieur, Nous nous sommes...
Teksto Submetigx per douyÃ¨re	Font-lingvo: Franca Monsieur, Nous nous sommes rencontrÃ©s au Salon de GenÃ¨ve 2008 et vous avez apprÃ©ciÃ© l'appareil de cardio traÃ®ning que j'ai inventÃ© qui s'appelle le Moulin.Cet appareil est peut Ãªtre le plus efficace Ã ce jour et une mÃ©daille d'or m'a Ã©tÃ© dÃ©cernÃ©e.... Aujourd'hui j'ai dÃ©posÃ© le brevet europÃ©en et la traduction anglaise est en cours! Pouvez vous me dire si vous Ãªtes toujours intÃ©ressÃ© par cet appareil? Si oui,avez-vous dÃ©jÃ pensÃ© Ã une solution commerciale? Veuillez recevoir ,monsieur,l'expression de mes salutations les plus sincÃ¨res.
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The Mill

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Urunghai

Cel-lingvo: Angla

Sir,
We met on the Geneva Show 2008 and you expressed interest in the cardiotraining device I have invented called the Mill. This device is perhaps the most effective nowadays and I have been awarded a gold medal...
Today I have registered the European licence and the English translation is on its way!
Could you please tell me if you are still interested in this device?! If so, have you already thought of a commercial solution?
Yours faithfully.

Laste validigita aŭ redaktita de lilian canale

- 9 Junio 2008 17:21

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	Aŭtoro	Afiŝo
		9 Junio 2008 01:39
	lilian canale Nombro da afiŝoj: 14972	H i Urunghai, I've made a few adjustments in the first paragraph and set a poll, I hope you agree. before edits: We have met in the GenÃ¨ve Salon 2008 and you have appreciated the cardiotraining device I have invented called the Mill. This device maybe is the most efficient one around these days and I have already been presented a golden medal.
		9 Junio 2008 03:59
	turkishmiss Nombro da afiŝoj: 2132	Salon de GenÃ©ve = Geneva Show
		9 Junio 2008 10:43
	IanMegill2 Nombro da afiŝoj: 1671	I would translate ...vous avez apprÃ©ciÃ©... as: ...you expressed interest in... I think ...you (have) appreciated... (please note: the French "passÃ© composÃ©" is usually translated with the English simple past) in English is too strong, it indicates a gratitude that is not there in the French. Apart from that, the translation is fine!
		9 Junio 2008 11:25
	Lein Nombro da afiŝoj: 3389	I think 'effective' is a more accurate translation than 'efficient'. Otherwise a great translation!
		9 Junio 2008 11:33
	MÃ¥ddie Nombro da afiŝoj: 1285	Hello, "Veuillez recevoir ,monsieur,l'expression de mes salutations les plus sincÃ¨res." == "Yours faithfully?" I know the meaning is the same, but still... Madeleine
		9 Junio 2008 17:08
	Urunghai Nombro da afiŝoj: 464	Well I completely agree wtih all of you so let me edit. (Always nice to see so many views on a translation from so many people!) I know what you mean, Madeleine, but the French like to exagerate when it comes to formality in letters
		9 Junio 2008 17:12
	MÃ¥ddie Nombro da afiŝoj: 1285	That's why my vote was + Have a nice day! Madeleine