Tłumaczenie - Turecki-Angielski - Kalamadim

This is a very good translation, but there are a few things that need to be fixed:

saying 'go' to you --> telling you to go
"içine çekmek" is not "inspire" - it's more like "inhale", but I think "absorb" would be a better translation here.
truth --> truths
what of it? --> what is it worth to anybody?
Bedelli mutluluklar düzeninde: Wow - that's a hard one. It seems to be "in the arrangement of happiness that has a cost", but I'm not sure.
in heart --> your heart

Dear Kafetzou..

Thank you for your suggestions..
I had no time to network..
I couldn't write to you..
I’ve arranged the translation..
I've changed the block 'what of it ',what is the use..
Do you think something it is correct?

It looks great now.