Tradução - Azeri-Inglês - ürÉ™yimdÉ™n tikan çıxarırdıEstado atual Tradução
Categoria Ficção / Estórias A solicitação desta tradução é "Somente o Significado". | ürÉ™yimdÉ™n tikan çıxarırdı | | Idioma de origem: Azeri
ürəyimdən tikan çıxarırdı |
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| he/she used to remove thorn from my heart | | Idioma alvo: Inglês
He used to remove the thorns from my heart. | | Or: she used to remove the thorns from my heart he or she is not declared here. For example, as a man, if I say this, I refer to a girl or vice versa:) |
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Último validado ou editado por Lein - 20 Dezembro 2010 12:58
Últimas Mensagens | | | | | 8 Dezembro 2010 18:20 | | LeinNúmero de Mensagens: 3389 | Hi Çevirmen
Me again...
'used to' in English means he (or she) did this frequently. Is that what the Turkish text says? Alternatives that I can think of are
He (has) removed the thorn from my heart
(with 'has' -> emphasises the result: the thorn is no longer there. Without 'has' -> emphasises the action; makes it sound like a longer process)
or
He used this (an instrument) to remove the thorn from my heart
Also a general remark with your English translations: in English, more articles ('the', 'an') are needed than in Turkish (so not 'thorn', but 'the thorn') - something to keep in mind when you translate!
One last thing: when it is not clear from the text whether 'he' or 'she' should be used, please use one in the translation and explain that it could be he or she in the comments section under the translation.
Please don't see all this as criticism!
Thanks for your help! | | | 11 Dezembro 2010 22:52 | | | hehe, I dont get this wrong since your comments on my English is treasure for me, it makes my English better.
When it comes to the(I started to use articles, previously I thought articles are not as important as you mentioned) translation, "used to" is necessary here since he said formerly, she has been doing that which is removing thorn frequently but has not been doing it now. and in this text, he emphasized the action not thorn's existence.
| | | 13 Dezembro 2010 13:52 | | LeinNúmero de Mensagens: 3389 | Thanks you! I have set a poll to see if others agree with the translation |
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