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Traduction - Esperanto-Anglais - mi sentis sekuron, la sono de la viro sur la rook...

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Titre	mi sentis sekuron, la sono de la viro sur la rook...
Texte Proposé par alireza	Langue de départ: Esperanto mi sentis sekuron, la sono de la viro sur la rook Altiris nian atenton, li skuis sian manon, li saltis, kaj post sekundo surÅprucigis nin malvarma akvo, la rida sono estis ripetata multfoje en mia orelo, tiu virino ridete diris: Iru al la avo, ni devas savi lin;
Commentaires pour la traduction	American English

Titre	I felt safe, the sound of the man on the rock...
Traduction Anglais Traduit par ArenaL5	Langue d'arrivée: Anglais I felt safe, the sound of the man on the rock caught our attention, he shook his hand, he jumped, and a second later, we were sprinkled with cold water, the laughing sound repeated many times in my ear, that woman said smiling: Go to Grandfather, we must save him;
Commentaires pour la traduction	"Shake" as in "tremble", not as in "greeting" "second" as in "time unit", not as in "number two" Such kind of yuxtaposition is also unnatural in Esperanto. The most likely explanation this message was translated from other non-European language. Therefore, commas were respected, except in "a second later, cold water", where I added one for clarity. "Avo" could either mean "grandfather" or "grandmother", but it's usually used for the former.

Dernière édition ou validation par Lein - 27 Juillet 2012 12:57

Derniers messages

	Auteur	Message
		12 Juillet 2012 17:20
	Lein Nombre de messages: 3389	Hi zciric I don't think we have many people who speak Esperanto; could you help me evaluate this text please? Thanks! CC: zciric
		27 Juillet 2012 12:49
	zciric Nombre de messages: 91	What I should to check? If the English translation was the "aim", it is good, only in two places there is need for changes, I think. The parts between '=': "...and a second later, =we were submerged in cold water=, the laughing sound repeated many times in my ear,..." surÅprucigis nin malvarma akvo - better is: sprinkled us cold water And the second thing is: "...that woman said smiling: =Go with Grandfather=, we must save him;..." In the Esperanto text the meaning is more for: "Go TO Grandfather...", not 'WITH'. If you need any further help... write. Greetings Zoran
		27 Juillet 2012 12:57
	Lein Nombre de messages: 3389	Thanks Zoran, that's very helpful