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Prevođenje - Poljski-Engleski - Przodkowie

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Przodkowie
Tekst
Poslao Grażyna
Izvorni jezik: Poljski

Gdyby nie Przodkowie moi, nic by mnie nie było,
Nic świadomości, nic duszy, nic ciała.
To Pradziadów znojne życie, że jestem, sprawiło,
A ze mną i we mnie cząstka ich została.

Naslov
The Ancestors
Prevođenje
Engleski

Preveo iluvmilka
Ciljni jezik: Engleski

If not for my ancestors, there would be nothing
No awareness, no soul, no body
It's our forefathers' exhausting life what caused my existence
And with me and in me a part of them remains
Posljednji potvrdio i uredio lilian canale - 13 travanj 2010 02:38





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6 travanj 2010 12:50

lilian canale
Broj poruka: 14972
Hi iluvmilka,

I don't understand this text

I'll set a poll to see if the community can help, OK?

6 travanj 2010 13:10

Aneta B.
Broj poruka: 4487
I'm not better than Ania at English, but if I could suggest some changes:

If not for my ancestors, there would be nothing
No awareness, no soul, no body
It's Forefathers' exhausting life what caused my existance(or: what caused that I exist)
And with me and in me the piece of them remained (past)
(or: so with me as in me)

My warm greetings!

10 travanj 2010 11:31

iluvmilka
Broj poruka: 77
you can obviously change whatever you want, Aneta's suggestions are v.helpful and if you think they sound better then please use them

11 travanj 2010 14:26

lilian canale
Broj poruka: 14972
Thanks Aneta for your suggestions. They sound fine. Just:
before "forefathers' life" there should be a possessive (my/our)
the piece ---> a piece

Do you agree, girls?

11 travanj 2010 16:57

Aneta B.
Broj poruka: 4487
You are right for sure, Lilly. We have no possessive before "forefathers", but I believe that pecularity of English grammar requires it. If so, I stand up for "our"...
I put "the" article before "piece" to emphasize it, beacuse it is a main word in that line. But, you are the master and I agree whatever you decide.
I'm glad if I could help a bit.