Translation - Turkish-English - herseyini ben Ã¶deyecem

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herseyini ben Ã¶deyecem

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vovere

Source language: Turkish

ya ben tanÄ±ÅŸtÄ±mÄ±z otelden ayrÄ±ldÄ±m kavga cÄ±ktÄ± hemmen yan tarafta balÄ±k restorantÄ± var oraya girdim ÅŸimdi orada calÄ±ÅŸÄ±yorum hem sen niye gelmiyorsun tÃ¼rkiye ye?bak gel senin tÃ¼m otel masraflarÄ±n bana ait vala gell beraber tatil yapalÄ±m olmazmÄ±?sÃ¶z tÃ¼m masraflarÄ±n bana ait yol paranda dahil herseyini ben Ã¶deyecem!

Title	I will pay everything
Translation English Translated by peabody	Target language: English I've left the hotel where we met; there was a fight, now I'm working in a fish restaurant near the hotel. By the way, why aren't you coming to Turkey? Look, come here, I will pay all your hotel bills, come here let's have a holiday together, what do you say? I promise I will pay all your bills including your tolls!

Validated by Lein - 26 July 2010 11:23

Last messages

	Author	Message
		20 July 2010 16:44
	Lein Number of messages: 3389	Hi peabody Looking good! a few things: - was there a fight or an argument? (fight: physical; argument: verbal) - 'Plus' -> could this be changed into 'And'? That would sound more natural. - 'huh' gives a somewhat negative feeling; it can be almost threatening. 'ok' would seem to fit better here. Let me know what you think so I can set a poll
		21 July 2010 11:49
	peabody Number of messages: 54	Yes, I felt a bit reproach, doesnt look like a fight or argument, but I can say "reproach"... I think it must be "plus".. "huh?" as "ha?" like "whaddaya say?" you know?
		21 July 2010 12:38
	Lein Number of messages: 3389	OK, thanks for replying I'm not sure about 'reproach' either so I have left 'fight' in for now and set a poll. Maybe someone else has a good idea
		21 July 2010 18:49
	peabody Number of messages: 54	1.reproach 2.rebuke 3.complaint 4.reproof 5.reproval 6.animadversion 7.expostulation 8.remonstrance 9.representation 10.complex 11.buildings 12.development ...maybe you can understand?
		21 July 2010 22:24
	merdogan Number of messages: 3769	I agree with Lein, and Plus why aren't you coming to Turkey?...> And, why don't you come to Turkey?
		22 July 2010 17:47
	peabody Number of messages: 54	Yours can be ok. but mine gives the meaning better.
		22 July 2010 18:14
	Lein Number of messages: 3389	Hi handyy Do you have a good idea for a word here? I am not sure if there was a fight, or an argument, or a complaint, or a rebuke, or maybe a difference of opinion, or one of around 100 more possibilities Help! CC: handyy
		24 July 2010 21:55
	cheesecake Number of messages: 980	IMO it's fine to say "a fight broke out", What do you say?
		25 July 2010 00:01
	peabody Number of messages: 54	possible.
		26 July 2010 10:28
	handyy Number of messages: 2118	Hi all Lein, I think "fight" is better here in this context, instead of "argument". As for "plus", it's not proper here. "and" or "by the way" can be used. About "huh?", you've already found a good solution. "what do you say" is OK.
		26 July 2010 11:23
	Lein Number of messages: 3389	Thank you all validated