Translation - English-Romanian - i want to make your heart confused time,cuz only...

Well, this text is so great..haha

a little confusing though...a few edits seem to be necessary in order to understand it before translation, I think...


CC: kafetzou

The Romanian translation is quite ok, taking into account the "abstract" nature of the original text
Still, Madeleine, there is still an "enjoy" there.... don't forget about it!

Very nice translation, by the way!

Hello,

I forgot about that "enjoy", it's true. This text was quite a challenge... let me say that.
(I am still not sure what it wants to say).

Thanks

Madeleine

My opinion :"don't forget what is in this world can take max your life" = Nu uita că ceea ce este pe lumea asta poate maximum să-ţi ia viaţa"...adică nu poate să-ţi ia mai mult decât viaţa. That would be my guess.

Hello, Freya

I think you solved the problem. I'm thinking about something like:

"Poate, cel mult, să îţi ia viaţa".

How about that?
Thanks for your message.

Madeleine

Umm - I think I am the first English native speaker to contribute to this one, and I have to say that this was clearly not written by a native speaker of English, and is incomprehensible in English. For example, what is "I want to make your heart confused time"? What is the word "time" doing in there?

Maybe the submitter could ask the writer to rewrite the text in his/her own language, which would give us a greater chance of understand what s/he meant.

CC: Francky5591

Thanks kaf!
Azitrad, please could you ask the requester to check her source and edit her text in order to let it be understandable in the source-language?
Thanks a lot!

Hi kafetzou!

I believe here that "confused time" means an abstract concept, something like "hard time", time when you are confused.... I want to transform your heart (soul) in a period of hard time, just because the heart is the only one who can deal with / beat hard times....

Does it make sense now?

Umm - are we supposed to guess the meaning of something when it doesn't really have a meaning in the source language? I don't think so. I did a Google search last night on "confused time", and it doesn't exist.