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Hallo Franzi

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Francky5591

Source language: German

Hallo Franzi,hoffe du hattest heute Unterricht auf Englisch oder Deutsch.Was habt ihr sonst noch unternommen?Ich hatte heute eine sagenhafte BeschÃ¤ftigung,dreimal darfst du raten...ich bin gespannt, ob du es herausfindest.Hier passiert rein gar nichts,es ist langweilig ohne dich.
Viele GrÃ¼ÃŸe an Deimante und ihre Eltern,sind die Gastgeschenke eigentlich gut angekommen?
Viel SpaÃŸ weiterhin wÃ¼nschen Papa und Mama.Viele GrÃ¼ÃŸe auch von Oma Mariechen.
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Title

Hi Franzi

Translation

English

Translated by

Minny

Target language: English

Hi Franzi,
I hope you had lessons in English or in German today. What else have you been doing? I had a fabulous occupation today. You are allowed three guesses... I wonder if you can find out what it was. Nothing is going on here. It is boring without you. Give my greetings to Deimante and her parents. Did the hosts like the gifts? Mum and Dad hope you keep having a good time. Also love from grandma Mariechen.

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- 3 May 2009 18:10

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		1 May 2009 23:50
	lilian canale จำนวนข้อความ: 14972	Hi Minny, There are some weird lines here, let's try to make it more natural in English... I think "I trust you had..." could be: "I hope/think/imagine/believe..." undertaken ---> been doing legendary? You can guess three times ---> You have three chances to guess... Remember me ---> Give my greetings/best wishes Were the gifts for the horsts well taken? Have a good time further on ---> Keep enjoying/having a good time papa and mamma ---> mum and dad
		1 May 2009 23:53
	Francky5591 จำนวนข้อความ: 12396	a little typo : horsts hosts
		2 May 2009 10:13
	Minny จำนวนข้อความ: 271	Hi, I have changed the text according to you suggestions. For "sagenhafte BeschÃ¤ftigung" I do not find better words than "legendary occupation".
		2 May 2009 13:22
	lilian canale จำนวนข้อความ: 14972	Perhaps Italo or iamfromaustria can help us with that adjective. Guys? CC: italo07 iamfromaustria
		2 May 2009 14:01
	italo07 จำนวนข้อความ: 1474	My suggestions: storming activity fabulous activity/work/job etc It must sound a bit ironical.
		2 May 2009 14:06
	italo07 จำนวนข้อความ: 1474	P.S. hoffen â‰ to believe, but to hope
		2 May 2009 19:00
	iamfromaustria จำนวนข้อความ: 1335	"Fabulous" or maybe "terrific" sounds best to me.
		2 May 2009 19:10
	lilian canale จำนวนข้อความ: 14972	And what about the rest? Is everything correct?
		2 May 2009 19:28
	iamfromaustria จำนวนข้อความ: 1335	Yes, except from a minor change I would make: It's not "English and German lessons" but "lessons in English and German".
		2 May 2009 19:44
	lilian canale จำนวนข้อความ: 14972	Do you mean that the classes are given in English and in German?
		2 May 2009 20:15
	iamfromaustria จำนวนข้อความ: 1335	Yep, the language the classes are held in, are English and German. Not the subjects.
		2 May 2009 20:35
	itsatrap100 จำนวนข้อความ: 279	dreimal darfst du raten = <you are allowed three guesses> "Viel SpaÃŸ weiterhin wÃ¼nschen Papa und Mama" =<furthermore, Mum and Dad hope you have fun.> Viele GrÃ¼ÃŸe, maybe better as <many greetings> Really only issue 2, where one sentence was broken up into 2 and the meaning was why I voted "could be improved".
		3 May 2009 18:07
	merdogan จำนวนข้อความ: 3769	in English and German today....in English OR German today