Translation - Pools-Engels - Szanowni klienci. Mamy przyjemność poinformować, ...

Costumers -> customers

Ops.. é mesmo, 'clientes' - errei quando digitava.

Dziękuję Goncy

we invite you to shopping is not acceptable English. Try again.

Best,

David

Try to say something else than "invite you to shopping" maybe invite you to shop here, or something. "invite you to shopping" is not correct English

Hi David,

do you think "invite you to go shopping" would be good here?

Regards

CC: dramati

there's no word about "stone baked pizzas" in original text, but "stone FOR baking pizzas"

not correct translation. "Stones for baking pizzas, breads and cakes will be available", not "stone baked pizzas, breads and cakes will be available". Much difference

What do you mean by "stone baked pizzas"?

Hi Olesniczanin

A "stone baked" pizza is a pizza that has been cooked upon a stone slab, rather than on an oven grill.

Hope this helps

Bises
Tantine

there's no word in original text about "stone baked pizzas" but about " stones for baking pizzas, breads and cakes" which will be delivered from that date

Yeah Tantine but the original text says about a stone, NOT about pizzas. Just like the others say, it's a stone for baking pizzas, breads and cakes. I think that makes a huge difference.

Regards

Humm I knew I would have problems with this.
I misunderstood the text.
I thought that 'stone-baked pizza' was part of the offer like the breads and cakes.
But it's really talking about the STONE itself you use to bake these things. Like this one I think >



Maybe an English expert could change it to 'stone for baking pizzas' ?

Yeah. I wonder why the translation was accepted even though many people had said it was wrong. Now the author himself claims he was wrong and no expert changes it.

Note that we have Swedish version now and even though I don't know Swedish I believe it's wrong too since it was probably based on the English text.

Regards.

Hi Olesniczanin

As you can see, I have edited the English version here. Let me know if the edit is ok.

I will cc a Swedish expert so as the Swedish version can be corrected if necessary.

Thanks for your vigilance and your help

Bises
Tantine

Forgot to cc !!!

CC: pias

Thanks a lot Tantine.
That was different from how the Swedish is translated right now, some edits to do here!

It seems fine now.
Thanks for your cooperation .

Regards.