Translation - Russies-Engels - чТоо ÑÑЛии тЫ заВтра нЕ поЛюьиш ?! ...Current status Translation
This translation request is "Meaning only". | чТоо ÑÑЛии тЫ заВтра нЕ поЛюьиш ?! ... | | Source language: Russies
чТоо ÑÑЛии тЫ заВтра нЕ поЛюьиш |
|
| What if you don't come to love tomorrow? | TranslationEngels Translated by Guzel_R | Target language: Engels
What if you don't come to love tomorrow? | Remarks about the translation | The original is in very bad Russian. Hope I understood the context. |
|
Laaste geakkrediteerde redigering deur lilian canale - 28 August 2008 16:20
Last messages | | | | | 27 August 2008 01:01 | | | | | | 27 August 2008 10:49 | | | | | | 27 August 2008 12:46 | | | The construction "Что еÑли"is mostly rendered into English as "What if" | | | 27 August 2008 20:26 | | | I agree with melissenta, but I would consider to change it all into "What if you don't begin to love tomorrow?". (That is a change in word order and another an addition of the word "begin" except from the change melissenta already proposed)
Excuse my "yes" vote, it was with these exceptions :-) (That is, probably I should have voted "no" ) | | | 27 August 2008 20:51 | | | I thought and I agreed with Piagabriella. I changed my first version. | | | 27 August 2008 22:47 | | | And I thought a little bit more and I have changed mind a bit. Now I think "What if you won't love tomorrow" would be better (no "begin", but I would keep "tomorrow" in the end of the phrase). I am sorry (if I am a bit confusing...)!!! I think this is my final decision as to how I would have translated it. I had to think about this one for a while.
| | | 28 August 2008 01:29 | | | Piagabriella,
don't worry, take it easy
Btw,as far as I know after "if" "will" and "won't" can't be used. I consulted a dictionary and I found that Russian word "полюбить" may be translated in English like "come to love". | | | 28 August 2008 01:29 | | | Yes, you are right Guzel.
The possible negative forms for "you" (assuming that the verb to be used is "fall in love" are:
"What if you don't fall in love..."
"What if you didn't fall in love..."
"What if you hadn't fallen in love..." |
|
|