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Translation - Turks-Engels - Cennet ve cehennem

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Title
Cennet ve cehennem
Text
Submitted by denizserap
Source language: Turks

Cennette, cehennemde yaşadığın hayatın ta kendisi,,,
Sevdiğinle yaşadığın en mutlu ve huzurlu an cennetin, onsuz ve mutsuz olduğun an da cehennemindir,,,
Sevdiğini kaybetmenin acısı alevlerde yanmak gibi değilmi?
Yada sevdiğinle bir bütün olduğunda cennetin gül kokuları sarmazmı çevreni? Cennetle-Cehennemi bilmek için yaşamak yeterli
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Title
Heaven and hell...
Translation
Engels

Translated by uakkaya
Target language: Engels

Heaven and hell, are absolutely the same as life.
The happiest and most peaceful moment you experience when you become a whole with your beloved one is your heaven, and an unhappy moment when you are not with him is your hell.
The pain of losing someone you love is like burning in flames, isn't it?
Or whenever you're with your beloved one, the smell of roses from heaven surrounds you, doesn't it? Living is enough just to get to know what heaven and hell is all about.
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Laaste geakkrediteerde redigering deur lilian canale - 9 April 2009 17:50





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7 April 2009 18:43

lilian canale
Number of messages: 14972
Hi uakkaya,
I've made a few edits. Tell me if you agree.

before edits:
heaven and hell, are absolutely the same with life.
The happiest and most peacefull moment you live with your beloved one is you heaven, and the unhappy moment when you're without him/her is your hell.
The pain of losing someone you love is the same like burning in flames, isn't it?
Or whenever you're with your beloved one, the smell of roses from heaven surrounds you, doesn't it? It's enough to be living just to get to know what heaven and hell is all about.

7 April 2009 19:38

merdogan
Number of messages: 3769
the same as life...> ..as life that you live
and
him/her

7 April 2009 23:23

denizk
Number of messages: 3
bence sevdiğinle bir bütün olduğunda->when you become a whole with your beloved one olarak çevrilse daha güzel olacak çünkü when you're with your beloved one olarak çevrildiğinde anlam kaybı oluyor.

9 April 2009 00:16

merdogan
Number of messages: 3769
Dear denizk,
Please write in English all what you want to say because our expert (dear lilian) dosen't know Turkish.

9 April 2009 00:21

lilian canale
Number of messages: 14972
Hi denizk,
Do you mean that
"...you live with your beloved ..." should be better as:
"...when you become a whole with your beloved"?

9 April 2009 17:37

denizk
Number of messages: 3
MerdoÄŸan thanks for warning me.
I'm sorry for posting my previous message in Turkish.
I think "...sevdiğinle bir bütün olduğunda..." should be translated as "..when you become a whole with your beloved one.." instead of "...when you're with your beloved one..." because if it's translated as the latter one there will be a loss in the meaning.
Thanks.

9 April 2009 20:20

uakkaya
Number of messages: 5
if lilian does not understand Turkish, how come she can make commets about a translation from Turkish to English?

9 April 2009 20:44

lilian canale
Number of messages: 14972
Hi uakkaya,
My job is evaluating the English, no matter in what language the original is written,