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عنوان
Keskin Bıçak Geldim yarım, kaldım yarım ...
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nourah پیشنهاد شده توسط
زبان مبداء: ترکی

Keskin Bıçak

Geldim yarım, kaldım yarım
Neydi, ne oldu şu tez canım
Ertelendim hayattan, sevdim yarım
Derken bugün olmazsa, olur yarın

Kendimden kaçak, yarim keskin bıçak
Nerde bende o yürek yardan cayacak
Kendimden kaçak, yarim keskin bıçak
Nerde bende o yürek yardan cayacak
Hep köşe bucak ...

Ben bu dünyayı anlayamadım,
Niyetlendim de altından kalkamadım.
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عنوان
Sharp knife
ترجمه
انگلیسی

turkishmiss ترجمه شده توسط
زبان مقصد: انگلیسی

I came imperfectly and have stayed that way
What was it? ..and what has happened to my impatient soul?
I am delayed in life, I loved deficiently.
Then, if it doesn’t happen today, it will happen tomorrow.

Running away from myself, my lover is a sharp knife.
Where is the courage in me to abandon my lover?
In every nook and cranny...

I wasn’t able to understand this world.
I intended, but I wasn't able to overcome it.
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Thank you Handyy
آخرین دارای اعتبار یا ویرایش شده توسط lilian canale - 7 آگوست 2009 21:53





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5 آگوست 2009 21:57

lilian canale
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Hi Miss, I'd only change the first line just to sound more natural into:

"I came imperfectly and (have) stayed that way"

What do you think?

5 آگوست 2009 21:58

lilian canale
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handyy? Do you agree?

CC: handyy

5 آگوست 2009 22:19

handyy
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Completely agree!

6 آگوست 2009 14:52

turkishmiss
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Edit done,.
Thank you LIlian and Handyy

7 آگوست 2009 00:09

merdogan
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I came imperfectly and have stayed that way...> I came half, remained half
Running away from himself, my lover is a sharp knife....> Running away from myself, my lover is a sharp knife

7 آگوست 2009 16:06

Chantal
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Merdogan, I think 'half' here has the meaning of 'imperfectly' as well?

what 'has' happened to my impatient soul

Derken bugün olmazsa, olur yarın : isn't derken something like 'saying' or maybe here 'thinking if it doesn't happen today it will happen tomorrow' ?

Beautiful poem

7 آگوست 2009 18:53

handyy
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Chantal, if you like the poem, then, I think you should listen to its music as well!

Have a look at here.

7 آگوست 2009 18:57

Chantal
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Aah.. Sezen!

7 آگوست 2009 21:22

Chantal
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handyy.. isn't it 'myself' instead if 'himself' in the 2nd paragraph, as merdogan pointed out?

7 آگوست 2009 21:31

handyy
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While listening to the song, I've always thought of that part as "kendinden kaçak"..
So, I didn't realize it. Yes, dear, it has to be "myself".

..and thank you Merdogan, for your vigilance.