Before edit: ja tebja razloublju i zaboudou kogda v patnitsy bydetsreda kogda virostout rozji po vsjoudou golybie kak jaidtsi drozda... kogda mish prokretsit kykareky...kogda dom postaitna trybje...toljiko togda (Sunnybebek)
It seems ok to me, but I have doubts about some words: jaidtsi, postaitna trybje I can't undertand them.
So I'll rewrite the request now with the original script except these words. And I hope Siberia and Ramarren will help with the other words