Translation - Polish-English - Moja tajemnica obecnoÅ›ci Twojej

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Category Poetry - Love / Friendship

Title	Moja tajemnica obecnoÅ›ci Twojej
Text Submitted by Aneta B.	Source language: Polish Moja tajemnica obecnoÅ›ci Twojej Tajemnica milczÄ…cych pragnieÅ„ czule odbiÅ‚a siÄ™ na mym ciele w Twych oczach namiÄ™tnych ujrzaÅ‚am najpiÄ™kniejszÄ… siebie w Twych dÅ‚oniach poszukujÄ…cych odkryÅ‚am rozkosz we mnie nie odkrytÄ… Jeszcze nigdy nie pragnÄ™Å‚am tak oddaÄ‡ duszy i ciaÅ‚a tak pragnÄ™Å‚am, Å¼e aÅ¼ siÄ™ nie oddaÅ‚am We wnÄ™trzu mej najgÅ‚Ä™bszej intymnoÅ›ci zapamiÄ™taÅ‚am TwÄ… OBECNOÅšÄ† na zawsze WiÄ™c dziÄ™kujÄ™ za Twoje â€žnieâ€ wypowiedziane potem lecz i w samÄ… porÄ™
Remarks about the translation	British English

Title

My secret of your presence

Translation

English

Translated by

AleksanderS

Target language: English

A secret of silent desires
has imprinted itself tenderly on my body

in Your fervent eyes
I saw the most beautiful me
in Your searching hands
I discovered a bliss not yet discovered within me

Never before did I desire so much to give my soul and my body
I desired it so much that I did not give myself

Inside my deepest intimacy
I have kept Your PRESENCE for ever

So, I thank you for your "no"
said afterwards, yet at the right time

Validated by lilian canale

- 5 November 2009 09:36

Last messages

	Author	Message
		5 November 2009 00:34
	Aneta B. Number of messages: 4487	I love the inversions of yours!
		5 November 2009 01:24
	lilian canale Number of messages: 14972	If the meaning was conveyed I think this one is perfect What do you say Aneta?
		5 November 2009 07:54
	Aneta B. Number of messages: 4487	I think the same, Lilly.