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seni özledim gittiğin her yerde özlemin var...
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Pateikta blade81
Originalo kalba: Turkų

seni özledim
gittiğin her yerde özlemin var
inanmıyor kalbim
sözlerime sensiz
seniz özledim
unuttuğum büyük yalan
gururumdan arta kalan
sensiz düşmen geçen zaman
seniz özledim
o kader ki
meşhur sanık
omzumda melekler tanık
içimde mektuplar yanık

Pavadinimas
I miss you
Vertimas
Anglų

Išvertė buketnur
Kalba, į kurią verčiama: Anglų

I miss you
my longing for you is everywhere you went
my heart doesn't believe
in my words without you
I miss you
The big lie that I forgot
is the remains of my pride
The time which passes without you is enemy( to me)
I miss you
It is fate which is the famous suspect
The angels on my shoulders are witnesses
The letters in my heart are burned
Pastabos apie vertimą
In original text it is "I missed you" but "I miss you" is more common in English.
"In my heart" is "inside me" in original text but it means so.
And "famous" can be "well-known"
The "letters" in the last line are the kind you find in an envelope, not an alphabet.
Validated by kafetzou - 14 rugpjūtis 2008 06:31





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10 rugpjūtis 2008 07:18

kafetzou
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corrections:

your longing --> ?? (isn't it the writer's longing?)
believe to --> believe in
remains --> the remains
How did you interpret "düşmen"??
withnesses --> witnesses

Maybe you should write a note stating that the "letters" in the last line are the kind you find in an envelope, not an alphabet.

10 rugpjūtis 2008 16:56

buketnur
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I asked blade81 "düşmen". It is "düşman". And thanks

10 rugpjūtis 2008 19:00

kafetzou
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sensiz düşmen geçen zaman = sensiz düşman gibi geçen zaman?? (meaning)

Also, we still have a problem with "your longing". I think he means "my longing for you", doesn't he?

10 rugpjūtis 2008 19:37

buketnur
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Ok "my longing for you" is clearer.
"sensiz düşman geçen zaman" I translated it so " The time which passes without you is enemy ( to me)"
and now should I say " the time which passes without you like an enemy" ?

10 rugpjūtis 2008 19:44

kafetzou
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No - sorry - I didn't make it clear. I'm just trying to understand the meaning of the original so I can judge whether your translation is correct. Does it mean "düşman gibi"? I don't understand "düşman geçen".

10 rugpjūtis 2008 19:46

buketnur
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"sensiz, düşman, geçen zaman." maybe it will be clear if we write so: sensiz geçen zaman, düşman

10 rugpjūtis 2008 19:48

kafetzou
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So is SHE the enemy, or is the TIME the enemy?

10 rugpjūtis 2008 19:56

buketnur
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the time is enemy