Hello, Angelus, could you please try to improve quality of this translation? some details, such as "in quam" (relative to "novam urbem", then "plurimae merces", then also "a tota terrarum" are not that precisely translated.
I saw you intended to use that "passive/active mode" of translation as well, but maybe you should have kept passive mode...
As Latin needs some training I didn't have for a long time, and as I'm short in time I can't help you more, but try and I'll see that this evening. Thanks