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		2 Október 2009 16:18
	lilian canale Hozzászólások száma: 14972	Hi Aneta, I think the 3rd line should read: "Cuius latus perforatum fluxit aqua et sanguine" and there should be a last line which completes the poem: "O Iesu dulcis, o Iesu pie, o Iesu fili Mariae." Am I right? CC: Aneta B.
		2 Október 2009 16:23
	Aneta B. Hozzászólások száma: 4487	"unda" and "aqua" are synonyms, so I think both are correct
		2 Október 2009 16:25
	lilian canale Hozzászólások száma: 14972	Oh, thanks, dear. I think I should refresh my Latin a bit I'll try the translation then
		2 Október 2009 16:27
	Aneta B. Hozzászólások száma: 4487	Try, Lilly, you are very skillful person. Good luck!
		2 Október 2009 16:42
	lilian canale Hozzászólások száma: 14972	I did Would you check the bridge? "Hail, oh true body born from the Virgin Mary Who suffered and was immolated on the cross by the man From his pierced side flew water and blood Be for us, remedy at the terrible time of death"
		2 Október 2009 17:43
	lilian canale Hozzászólások száma: 14972	Aneta?
		2 Október 2009 17:50
	Aneta B. Hozzászólások száma: 4487	Sorry, I was messaging with some friends. I will chech in a minute. Please wait a moment.
		2 Október 2009 18:16
	Aneta B. Hozzászólások száma: 4487	Great translation, Lilly! Only tiny things: Vere passum = (was)streched indeed praegustatum? I wouldn't translate it "remedy". It is a participle from "praegusto, are" and I think the author says here about "eating body of Christ" - about Eucharisty (?) I don't know how you call it in English...
		2 Október 2009 18:52
	lilian canale Hozzászólások száma: 14972	Humm... "Who was stretched and immolated..."? 'wafer' instead of 'remedy'?
		2 Október 2009 18:59
	Aneta B. Hozzászólások száma: 4487	the body of Christ was streched and immolated - the body of a son of Maria, from the first line... yes "wafer" but it would be literal too much, you should use some methaphor.And it is not a noun but participle which can be translated as a verb too. For example, we (Polish people) call the process "accepting body of Christ"...? And it is about the process before the death. Am I clear now, dear Lilly?
		2 Október 2009 19:11
	lilian canale Hozzászólások száma: 14972	Hail, oh true body born from the Virgin Mary Stretched and immolated on the cross by the man From his pierced side flew water and blood Be for us, the communion at the terrible time of death What about that?
		2 Október 2009 19:15
	Aneta B. Hozzászólások száma: 4487	Wow! You used the noun and it is still acceptable! You are great, Lilly. I thought about a verb here, but anyway your English translation is perfect now!
		2 Október 2009 19:18
	Aneta B. Hozzászólások száma: 4487	Oh sorry, not "by the man", but "for man(kind)", I haven't noticed before...

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