Оригинален текст - Латински - Ave verum corpus natum de Maria Virgine Vere...

Текущо състояние ‎Оригинален текст

Този текст го има и на следните езици: Латински

Заглавие	Ave verum corpus natum de Maria Virgine Vere...
Текст, който трябва да бъде преведен Предоставено от Marcio Paiva	Език, от който се превежда: Латински Ave verum corpus natum de Maria Virgine Vere passum, immolatum in cruce pro homine Cuius latus perforatum unda fluxit et sanguine Esto nobis praegustatum mortis in examine

2 Октомври 2009 15:46

Последно мнение

	Автор	Мнение
		2 Октомври 2009 16:18
	lilian canale Общо мнения: 14972	Hi Aneta, I think the 3rd line should read: "Cuius latus perforatum fluxit aqua et sanguine" and there should be a last line which completes the poem: "O Iesu dulcis, o Iesu pie, o Iesu fili Mariae." Am I right? CC: Aneta B.
		2 Октомври 2009 16:23
	Aneta B. Общо мнения: 4487	"unda" and "aqua" are synonyms, so I think both are correct
		2 Октомври 2009 16:25
	lilian canale Общо мнения: 14972	Oh, thanks, dear. I think I should refresh my Latin a bit I'll try the translation then
		2 Октомври 2009 16:27
	Aneta B. Общо мнения: 4487	Try, Lilly, you are very skillful person. Good luck!
		2 Октомври 2009 16:42
	lilian canale Общо мнения: 14972	I did Would you check the bridge? "Hail, oh true body born from the Virgin Mary Who suffered and was immolated on the cross by the man From his pierced side flew water and blood Be for us, remedy at the terrible time of death"
		2 Октомври 2009 17:43
	lilian canale Общо мнения: 14972	Aneta?
		2 Октомври 2009 17:50
	Aneta B. Общо мнения: 4487	Sorry, I was messaging with some friends. I will chech in a minute. Please wait a moment.
		2 Октомври 2009 18:16
	Aneta B. Общо мнения: 4487	Great translation, Lilly! Only tiny things: Vere passum = (was)streched indeed praegustatum? I wouldn't translate it "remedy". It is a participle from "praegusto, are" and I think the author says here about "eating body of Christ" - about Eucharisty (?) I don't know how you call it in English...
		2 Октомври 2009 18:52
	lilian canale Общо мнения: 14972	Humm... "Who was stretched and immolated..."? 'wafer' instead of 'remedy'?
		2 Октомври 2009 18:59
	Aneta B. Общо мнения: 4487	the body of Christ was streched and immolated - the body of a son of Maria, from the first line... yes "wafer" but it would be literal too much, you should use some methaphor.And it is not a noun but participle which can be translated as a verb too. For example, we (Polish people) call the process "accepting body of Christ"...? And it is about the process before the death. Am I clear now, dear Lilly?
		2 Октомври 2009 19:11
	lilian canale Общо мнения: 14972	Hail, oh true body born from the Virgin Mary Stretched and immolated on the cross by the man From his pierced side flew water and blood Be for us, the communion at the terrible time of death What about that?
		2 Октомври 2009 19:15
	Aneta B. Общо мнения: 4487	Wow! You used the noun and it is still acceptable! You are great, Lilly. I thought about a verb here, but anyway your English translation is perfect now!
		2 Октомври 2009 19:18
	Aneta B. Общо мнения: 4487	Oh sorry, not "by the man", but "for man(kind)", I haven't noticed before...