Översättning - Turkiska-Engelska - Sayın Yetkili Türkiye'den talep ettiÄŸiniz...

Hi erdem

Although there are no errors in your English, it does sound a bit unnatural. What do you think about this suggestion? Does it keep the same meaning as the Turkish text? Please let me know what you think

Dear Sir, it is very unusual to address someone as 'dear official - in fact, it sounds a bit rude!
We produce and distribute the products you requested from Turkey. We would like to ('want' again sounds rather rude) work with you; please contact us.
We export our products to different countries.
Hoping to work together, we await your reaction.
Kind regards.

Hi Lein,
Thank you for your suggestion, it keeps the same meaning, only in turkish text it does not say "we await for your reaction", but your translation is better for this text.

Thank you! I have started a poll to get other people's opinions.

We would...........contact us...>
if you communicated with us, we would like to work with you.

-- We would like to work with you; please contact us. --> If you please contact us, we would like to work with you as well.

-- Hoping to work together, we await your reaction. --> Hoping to work together, we're waiting for your favourable reply.

Thanks handyy! I have edited the latter sugestion; I think that comes closer to erdem's original translation too.

As for the first one, this sounds a bit more convoluted, less common. What is the difference you want to emphasise here?

Well, my first offer is the word by word translation. If it's too convoluted, then, let's keep the current one.

OK, thanks! I think the meaning is the same and the version we have is more commonly used. Yours would be a good alternative too
I'll validate

You're welcome!