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Tłumaczenie - Turecki-Angielski - hafif formulü gündüz kıremi içeriÄŸindeki cilt...

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hafif formulü gündüz kıremi içeriğindeki cilt...
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Język źródłowy: Turecki

hafif formulü gündüz kıremi içeriğindeki cilt besleyiciler ile cildinizin ihtiyacı olan bakımı sağlayarak sağlıklı ve parlak bir cilde kavuşmanızı sağlar cildi farklı katmanlarını nemlendiren ve tüm gün nemlendirme sağlayan avon daily skin allowance kompleksi cildinizin yumuşak ve pürüsüz olmasına yardım eder 15 faktörlük güneş koruması içerir.

Tytuł
The soft formulated day cream
Tłumaczenie
Angielski

Tłumaczone przez cheesecake
Język docelowy: Angielski

The light-formula day cream with its skin nourishing ingredients, ensures that you attain healthy and bright skin by providing the maintenance that your skin needs. The Avon Daily Skin Complex moisturizes the different layers of the skin and provides moisturizing the whole day, with SPF 15, helping to make your skin soft and smooth.
Ostatnio zatwierdzony albo edytowany przez kafetzou - 18 Styczeń 2009 17:15





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6 Styczeń 2009 01:04

kafetzou
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For "hafif", I would say "light", but then we get into trouble with the syntax. Maybe "The light-formula day cream ..."

Also, the last part should be "SPF 15", so maybe like this: "The Avon Daily Skin Complex moisturizes ... and provides ... with SPF 15, helping to ..."

6 Styczeń 2009 09:47

cheesecake
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I don't know what SPF means I mean I have never heard before. I guess sun protecting makes the meaning more obvious to let people understand

6 Styczeń 2009 17:01

kafetzou
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SPF = sun protection factor

We always use this abbreviation for this in English.

18 Styczeń 2009 00:52

cheesecake
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I guess no one has any more comments about this translation Kafetzou, maybe you would like to check it.

18 Styczeń 2009 00:55

kafetzou
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You haven't made the corrections I suggested, cheesecake.

18 Styczeń 2009 00:58

cheesecake
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Its done now.

18 Styczeń 2009 01:21

kafetzou
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Not quite:

provides you to --> ensures that you
with the skin nourishing in its ingredients --> with its skin nourishing ingredients ( and this should be moved to right after "The light-formula day cream" )
15 SPF --> SPF 15

18 Styczeń 2009 01:30

cheesecake
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It's done.
Is it wrong to use "provides you.." like that?

18 Styczeń 2009 02:55

kafetzou
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It would have to be "provides you with", and then it would have to be followed by a noun, not a verb.

18 Styczeń 2009 02:55

kafetzou
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Actually, you still need to take out the "to" before "attain".

18 Styczeń 2009 13:24

cheesecake
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OK, it has been done