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Traduko - Franca-Angla - salle des serveurs

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Titolo	salle des serveurs
Teksto Submetigx per IsaChanel	Font-lingvo: Franca Vous avez tous accÃ¨s Ã la salle des serveurs avec votre carte magnÃ©tique. Nous voudrions vous convoquer Ã une courte sÃ©ance d'information d'environ 20 minutes concernant la nouvelle installation de protection incendie au gaz dans la salle des serveurs. La sÃ©ance aura pour but de vous informer des actions Ã prendre en cas d'alarme si vous Ãªtes prÃ©sents dans la salle. Nous pourrons aussi rÃ©pondre Ã vos questions. Une deuxiÃ¨me sÃ©ance sera convoquÃ©e pour ceux qui ne peuvent Ãªtre prÃ©sents.
Rimarkoj pri la traduko	Domaine ingÃ©nierie en anglais amÃ©ricain

Titolo	Server Room
Traduko Angla Tradukita per babachiko	Cel-lingvo: Angla You all have access to the server room with your magnetic card. You are called to attend a short briefing of approximately 20 minutes on the new gas-operated fire protection equipment in the server room. The objective of the meeting is to inform you about the actions to be taken in case of an alarm while you are in the room. We will also be able to answer your questions. A second briefing will be convened for those who cannot attend this one.
Rimarkoj pri la traduko	I have dropped the specification "au gaz" and translated "incendie au gaz" by just "fire." It seems to me that "gaz fire protection equipment" would be a bit heavy.

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- 14 Septembro 2009 12:38

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	Aŭtoro	Afiŝo
		6 Septembro 2009 14:23
	lilian canale Nombro da afiŝoj: 14972	Hi babachiko, please complete your translation. The last line was not translated. Also: to the server room magnetic card information meeting ---> briefing on how to react if an alarm occurs ---> of the actions to be taken in case of an alarm
		9 Septembro 2009 11:16
	Maybe:-) Nombro da afiŝoj: 338	I would have translated the second sentence "Nous voudrions vous convoquer..." --> "We would like to invite you to..."
		9 Septembro 2009 16:32
	Francky5591 Nombro da afiŝoj: 12396	"la nouvelle installation de protection incendie au gaz" wasn't entirely translated, "au gaz" isn't translated "sÃ©ance" : "session" Rest is ok IMO
		9 Septembro 2009 16:42
	babachiko Nombro da afiŝoj: 11	Just to say I got the suggestions. I'd love to incorporate'm in the translation, but the internet interface is a bit intricate and I didn't manage to access to an editable text. Too bad.
		9 Septembro 2009 16:50
	Iserb Nombro da afiŝoj: 30	In the French version, "Nous voudrions vous convoquer" contains the idea that attending this briefing is compulsory. I'm not under that impression when I read the English version. May I suggest something like "you are asked to attend" instead of "invited"?
		10 Septembro 2009 13:42
	etater Nombro da afiŝoj: 6	"..you are invited to attend.." "...the aim of the meeting will be.." "..a second briefing...for those who cannot attend the first.."
		11 Septembro 2009 08:56
	babachiko Nombro da afiŝoj: 11	I basically agree with the remarks made. I am an engineer, not a linguist; it is probably better that I don't get involved in this site. Now when I try to incorporate your remarks in the translation I get the following message: QUOTE DÃ©solÃ©, la traduction est en cours d'Ã©valuation et vous ne pouvez pas la modifier. Toute modification que vous souhaitez apporter doit Ãªtre postÃ©e via l'envoie d'un message. UNQUOTE. Good luck to you all!
		11 Septembro 2009 08:57
	babachiko Nombro da afiŝoj: 11	Btw it should be "via l'envoi d'un message"