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제목	salle des serveurs
본문 IsaChanel에 의해서 게시됨	원문 언어: 프랑스어 Vous avez tous accÃ¨s Ã la salle des serveurs avec votre carte magnÃ©tique. Nous voudrions vous convoquer Ã une courte sÃ©ance d'information d'environ 20 minutes concernant la nouvelle installation de protection incendie au gaz dans la salle des serveurs. La sÃ©ance aura pour but de vous informer des actions Ã prendre en cas d'alarme si vous Ãªtes prÃ©sents dans la salle. Nous pourrons aussi rÃ©pondre Ã vos questions. Une deuxiÃ¨me sÃ©ance sera convoquÃ©e pour ceux qui ne peuvent Ãªtre prÃ©sents.
이 번역물에 관한 주의사항	Domaine ingÃ©nierie en anglais amÃ©ricain

제목	Server Room
번역 영어 babachiko에 의해서 번역되어짐	번역될 언어: 영어 You all have access to the server room with your magnetic card. You are called to attend a short briefing of approximately 20 minutes on the new gas-operated fire protection equipment in the server room. The objective of the meeting is to inform you about the actions to be taken in case of an alarm while you are in the room. We will also be able to answer your questions. A second briefing will be convened for those who cannot attend this one.
이 번역물에 관한 주의사항	I have dropped the specification "au gaz" and translated "incendie au gaz" by just "fire." It seems to me that "gaz fire protection equipment" would be a bit heavy.

에 의해서 마지막으로 검증 또는 수정되었습니다 - 2009년 9월 14일 12:38

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		2009년 9월 6일 14:23
	lilian canale 게시물 갯수: 14972	Hi babachiko, please complete your translation. The last line was not translated. Also: to the server room magnetic card information meeting ---> briefing on how to react if an alarm occurs ---> of the actions to be taken in case of an alarm
		2009년 9월 9일 11:16
	Maybe:-) 게시물 갯수: 338	I would have translated the second sentence "Nous voudrions vous convoquer..." --> "We would like to invite you to..."
		2009년 9월 9일 16:32
	Francky5591 게시물 갯수: 12396	"la nouvelle installation de protection incendie au gaz" wasn't entirely translated, "au gaz" isn't translated "sÃ©ance" : "session" Rest is ok IMO
		2009년 9월 9일 16:42
	babachiko 게시물 갯수: 11	Just to say I got the suggestions. I'd love to incorporate'm in the translation, but the internet interface is a bit intricate and I didn't manage to access to an editable text. Too bad.
		2009년 9월 9일 16:50
	Iserb 게시물 갯수: 30	In the French version, "Nous voudrions vous convoquer" contains the idea that attending this briefing is compulsory. I'm not under that impression when I read the English version. May I suggest something like "you are asked to attend" instead of "invited"?
		2009년 9월 10일 13:42
	etater 게시물 갯수: 6	"..you are invited to attend.." "...the aim of the meeting will be.." "..a second briefing...for those who cannot attend the first.."
		2009년 9월 11일 08:56
	babachiko 게시물 갯수: 11	I basically agree with the remarks made. I am an engineer, not a linguist; it is probably better that I don't get involved in this site. Now when I try to incorporate your remarks in the translation I get the following message: QUOTE DÃ©solÃ©, la traduction est en cours d'Ã©valuation et vous ne pouvez pas la modifier. Toute modification que vous souhaitez apporter doit Ãªtre postÃ©e via l'envoie d'un message. UNQUOTE. Good luck to you all!
		2009년 9월 11일 08:57
	babachiko 게시물 갯수: 11	Btw it should be "via l'envoi d'un message"