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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 6日 14:23 |
| | Hi babachiko,
please complete your translation. The last line was not translated.
Also:
to the server room
magnetic card
information meeting ---> briefing
on how to react if an alarm occurs ---> of the actions to be taken in case of an alarm |
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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 9日 11:16 |
| | I would have translated the second sentence "Nous voudrions vous convoquer..." --> "We would like to invite you to..." |
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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 9日 16:32 |
| | "la nouvelle installation de protection incendie au gaz" wasn't entirely translated, "au gaz" isn't translated
"séance" : "session"
Rest is ok IMO |
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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 9日 16:42 |
| | Just to say I got the suggestions. I'd love to incorporate'm in the translation, but the internet interface is a bit intricate and I didn't manage to access to an editable text.
Too bad. |
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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 9日 16:50 |
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Iserbचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 30 | In the French version, "Nous voudrions vous convoquer" contains the idea that attending this briefing is compulsory. I'm not under that impression when I read the English version. May I suggest something like "you are asked to attend" instead of "invited"? |
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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 10日 13:42 |
| | "..you are invited to attend.."
"...the aim of the meeting will be.."
"..a second briefing...for those who cannot attend the first.." |
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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 11日 08:56 |
| | I basically agree with the remarks made. I am an engineer, not a linguist; it is probably better that I don't get involved in this site.
Now when I try to incorporate your remarks in the translation I get the following message:
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Désolé, la traduction est en cours d'évaluation et vous ne pouvez pas la modifier. Toute modification que vous souhaitez apporter doit être postée via l'envoie d'un message.
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Good luck to you all! |
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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 11日 08:57 |
| | Btw it should be "via l'envoi d'un message" |
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