Prevođenje - Engleski-Hebrejski - If destiny is kind i have the rest on my mindTrenutni status Prevođenje
Kategorija Pjesma - Svakodnevni život | If destiny is kind i have the rest on my mind | | Izvorni jezik: Engleski
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Posljednji potvrdio i uredio ittaihen - 24 kolovoz 2008 20:21
Najnovije poruke | | | | | 17 kolovoz 2008 12:58 | | | Hi zehavit
Your translation is very nicely worded, but I have a feeling, based on the French translation, that this had not been the intent. In French they used 'l'esprit tranquille' (an easy mind) to translate 'rest', so I think perhaps in this case we need the 'relaxed' sense of 'rest', which also makes more sense in this phrase. Could you try to change your translation accordingly?
thanks,
libera
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