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Translation - Turkish-English - Sayın Yetkili Türkiye'den talep ettiğiniz...Current status Translation
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Category Business / Jobs | Sayın Yetkili Türkiye'den talep ettiğiniz... | | Source language: Turkish
Sayın Yetkili
Türkiye'den talep ettiğiniz ürünlerin üretimini ve dağıtımını yapmaktayız. Bizimle iletişime geçerseniz sizinle de çalışmak isteriz. Mallarımızı çeşitli ülkelere ihraç etmekteyiz. Birlikte çalışma umuduyla iyi haberlerinizi bekliyoruz. İyi çalışmalar dileriz. |
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| | TranslationEnglish Translated by erdem644 | Target language: English
Dear Sir, We produce and distribute the products you requested from Turkey. We would like to work with you; please contact us. We export our products to different countries. Hoping to work together, we await your favourable reply. Kind regards, |
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Validated by Lein - 22 July 2010 13:49
Last messages | | | | | 9 July 2010 17:55 | | LeinNumber of messages: 3389 | Hi erdem
Although there are no errors in your English, it does sound a bit unnatural. What do you think about this suggestion? Does it keep the same meaning as the Turkish text? Please let me know what you think
Dear Sir, it is very unusual to address someone as 'dear official - in fact, it sounds a bit rude!
We produce and distribute the products you requested from Turkey. We would like to ('want' again sounds rather rude) work with you; please contact us.
We export our products to different countries.
Hoping to work together, we await your reaction.
Kind regards. | | | 9 July 2010 23:06 | | | Hi Lein,
Thank you for your suggestion, it keeps the same meaning, only in turkish text it does not say "we await for your reaction", but your translation is better for this text. | | | 19 July 2010 13:42 | | LeinNumber of messages: 3389 | Thank you! I have started a poll to get other people's opinions. | | | 20 July 2010 08:56 | | | We would...........contact us...>
if you communicated with us, we would like to work with you. | | | 20 July 2010 11:49 | | handyyNumber of messages: 2118 | -- We would like to work with you; please contact us. --> If you please contact us, we would like to work with you as well.
-- Hoping to work together, we await your reaction. --> Hoping to work together, we're waiting for your favourable reply.
| | | 21 July 2010 17:27 | | LeinNumber of messages: 3389 | Thanks handyy! I have edited the latter sugestion; I think that comes closer to erdem's original translation too.
As for the first one, this sounds a bit more convoluted, less common. What is the difference you want to emphasise here? | | | 22 July 2010 13:47 | | handyyNumber of messages: 2118 | Well, my first offer is the word by word translation. If it's too convoluted, then, let's keep the current one. | | | 22 July 2010 13:49 | | LeinNumber of messages: 3389 | OK, thanks! I think the meaning is the same and the version we have is more commonly used. Yours would be a good alternative too
I'll validate | | | 22 July 2010 13:56 | | handyyNumber of messages: 2118 | You're welcome! |
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