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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 17日 19:43 |
| | Hi Bamsa, could you help me evaluate this translation, it seems it will not get any votes  CC: Bamsa |
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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 18日 01:05 |
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Bamsaचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 1524 | Hi lilian 
Hi pia
Uff..  I'm not so poetic, but you are pia
If I would translate the first verse, I would do it like this:
The mind enchanted by
the strait, heath and pass;
the passage of hope is chosen
westward Breiðafjörðinn.
it seems to be the same as your translation |
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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 18日 01:09 |
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Bamsaचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 1524 | The second verse:
Everything is carried away, grime
from the grooves and mountains,
because the spring blooms with flowers
spread in all traces.
My English is not one of the best, so there may be some errors to correct. |
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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 18日 01:17 |
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Bamsaचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 1524 | The third verse:
The day tilt "daypearls"
scattered all over the field vegetation;
the mountain flower grow around
the blessed mountain river.
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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 18日 01:19 |
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Bamsaचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 1524 | The fourth verse:
Run out of mercy at this place,
then the crowd will be divided,
because the gate is open to
the wide ocean water.
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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 18日 10:35 |
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piasचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 8113 |  Thank you for the kind words Ernst... but it seems I’ve misunderstood much. Sorry! I waited a long time before I decided to give this request a try, guess I should have left it for a native to do. Lilian, if it’s easier to reject my translation and let someone else try, please do that!
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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 19日 23:22 |
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piasचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 8113 | Not rejected yet
May I try to correct it?? |
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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 19日 23:30 |
| | I was waiting for your correction
Then, I suggest that you share the points with Bamsa  |
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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 19日 23:37 |
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piasचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 8113 | Sure!
Ernst,
is it ok. now? CC: Bamsa |
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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 19日 23:56 |
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Bamsaचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 1524 | For me it looks fine, Pia Those lyrics can be understood in different ways. |
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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 20日 00:00 |
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piasचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 8113 | Thanks for the help  CC: Bamsa |
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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 20日 00:23 |
| | I think there's no use in setting a poll, so if you agree I'll accept the translation.
CC: Bamsa |
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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 20日 00:27 |
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Bamsaचिठ्ठीको सङ्ख्या: 1524 | I agree to accept it |
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2009年 सेप्टेम्बर 20日 00:34 |
| | Done! |
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