| | |
| |
17 Вересня 2009 19:43 |
| | Hi Bamsa, could you help me evaluate this translation, it seems it will not get any votes  CC: Bamsa |
| |
18 Вересня 2009 01:05 |
| 
BamsaКількість повідомлень: 1524 | Hi lilian 
Hi pia
Uff..  I'm not so poetic, but you are pia
If I would translate the first verse, I would do it like this:
The mind enchanted by
the strait, heath and pass;
the passage of hope is chosen
westward Breiðafjörðinn.
it seems to be the same as your translation |
| |
18 Вересня 2009 01:09 |
|
BamsaКількість повідомлень: 1524 | The second verse:
Everything is carried away, grime
from the grooves and mountains,
because the spring blooms with flowers
spread in all traces.
My English is not one of the best, so there may be some errors to correct. |
| |
18 Вересня 2009 01:17 |
|
BamsaКількість повідомлень: 1524 | The third verse:
The day tilt "daypearls"
scattered all over the field vegetation;
the mountain flower grow around
the blessed mountain river.
|
| |
18 Вересня 2009 01:19 |
|
BamsaКількість повідомлень: 1524 | The fourth verse:
Run out of mercy at this place,
then the crowd will be divided,
because the gate is open to
the wide ocean water.
|
| |
18 Вересня 2009 10:35 |
| 
piasКількість повідомлень: 8113 |  Thank you for the kind words Ernst... but it seems I’ve misunderstood much. Sorry! I waited a long time before I decided to give this request a try, guess I should have left it for a native to do. Lilian, if it’s easier to reject my translation and let someone else try, please do that!
|
| |
19 Вересня 2009 23:22 |
|
piasКількість повідомлень: 8113 | Not rejected yet
May I try to correct it?? |
| |
19 Вересня 2009 23:30 |
| | I was waiting for your correction
Then, I suggest that you share the points with Bamsa  |
| |
19 Вересня 2009 23:37 |
|
piasКількість повідомлень: 8113 | Sure!
Ernst,
is it ok. now? CC: Bamsa |
| |
19 Вересня 2009 23:56 |
|
BamsaКількість повідомлень: 1524 | For me it looks fine, Pia Those lyrics can be understood in different ways. |
| |
20 Вересня 2009 00:00 |
|
piasКількість повідомлень: 8113 | Thanks for the help  CC: Bamsa |
| |
20 Вересня 2009 00:23 |
| | I think there's no use in setting a poll, so if you agree I'll accept the translation.
CC: Bamsa |
| |
20 Вересня 2009 00:27 |
|
BamsaКількість повідомлень: 1524 | I agree to accept it |
| |
20 Вересня 2009 00:34 |
| | Done! |
Улюблені переклади
- 20 Вересня 2009 00:34