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Kategorija Daina | Hugann seiða svalli frá Hugann seiða svalli frá... | | Originalo kalba: Islandų
Hugann seiða svalli frá
sundin, heiði og skörðin;
vona-leið er valin þá
vestur Breiðafjörðinn.
Alt er borið burtu gróm
bæði af Skor og fjöllum,
þvà að vorið blóm við blóm
breiddi à sporum öllum.
Dægur-halli daggperlum
dreifir vallargróðann;
bjargastalla beltast um
blessuð fjallamóðan.
Þrjóti grið á þessum stað,
þá er lið að skeiðum,
þvà að hlið er opið að
úthafsmiðum breiðum. | | A beautiful song. I don't need to understand the lyrics to know that, but I'm curious. |
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Išvertė  pias | Kalba, į kurią verčiama: Anglų
The mind enchanted by
the strait, the plateau and the mountain pass;
hopefulness is chosen there
westwards Breiðafjörðinn.
Everything is carried away,
mud from grooves and mountains,
because the spring bloom with flowers
spread all over the tracks.
Day conquers the dewdrops
scattered all over the field vegetation;
the mountain flowers grow around
the blessed mountain river.
When there's no mercy upon this place
the crowd will be divided,
because the gate is open to
the wide sea. | | Acc. to an Old Icelandic dictionary â€Dægur†should be translated as â€half a day†(could be night or day) but I guess it sounds a bit odd to write so? I wrote “Day†instead.
“úthafsmiðum†= “outerseafisheriesâ€â€¦ interpreted it as the wide sea. |
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17 rugsėjis 2009 19:43 | | | Hi Bamsa, could you help me evaluate this translation, it seems it will not get any votes  CC: Bamsa | | |
18 rugsėjis 2009 01:05 | | 
BamsaŽinučių kiekis: 1524 | Hi lilian 
Hi pia
Uff..  I'm not so poetic, but you are pia
If I would translate the first verse, I would do it like this:
The mind enchanted by
the strait, heath and pass;
the passage of hope is chosen
westward Breiðafjörðinn.
it seems to be the same as your translation | | |
18 rugsėjis 2009 01:09 | |
BamsaŽinučių kiekis: 1524 | The second verse:
Everything is carried away, grime
from the grooves and mountains,
because the spring blooms with flowers
spread in all traces.
My English is not one of the best, so there may be some errors to correct. | | |
18 rugsėjis 2009 01:17 | |
BamsaŽinučių kiekis: 1524 | The third verse:
The day tilt "daypearls"
scattered all over the field vegetation;
the mountain flower grow around
the blessed mountain river.
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18 rugsėjis 2009 01:19 | |
BamsaŽinučių kiekis: 1524 | The fourth verse:
Run out of mercy at this place,
then the crowd will be divided,
because the gate is open to
the wide ocean water.
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18 rugsėjis 2009 10:35 | | 
piasŽinučių kiekis: 8114 |  Thank you for the kind words Ernst... but it seems I’ve misunderstood much. Sorry! I waited a long time before I decided to give this request a try, guess I should have left it for a native to do. Lilian, if it’s easier to reject my translation and let someone else try, please do that!
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19 rugsėjis 2009 23:22 | |
piasŽinučių kiekis: 8114 | Not rejected yet
May I try to correct it?? | | |
19 rugsėjis 2009 23:30 | | | I was waiting for your correction
Then, I suggest that you share the points with Bamsa  | | |
19 rugsėjis 2009 23:37 | |
piasŽinučių kiekis: 8114 | Sure!
Ernst,
is it ok. now? CC: Bamsa | | |
19 rugsėjis 2009 23:56 | |
BamsaŽinučių kiekis: 1524 | For me it looks fine, Pia Those lyrics can be understood in different ways. | | |
20 rugsėjis 2009 00:00 | |
piasŽinučių kiekis: 8114 | Thanks for the help  CC: Bamsa | | |
20 rugsėjis 2009 00:23 | | | I think there's no use in setting a poll, so if you agree I'll accept the translation.
CC: Bamsa | | |
20 rugsėjis 2009 00:27 | |
BamsaŽinučių kiekis: 1524 | I agree to accept it | | |
20 rugsėjis 2009 00:34 | | | Done! |
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