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Translation - French-English - salle des serveurs

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Title	salle des serveurs
Text Submitted by IsaChanel	Source language: French Vous avez tous accÃ¨s Ã la salle des serveurs avec votre carte magnÃ©tique. Nous voudrions vous convoquer Ã une courte sÃ©ance d'information d'environ 20 minutes concernant la nouvelle installation de protection incendie au gaz dans la salle des serveurs. La sÃ©ance aura pour but de vous informer des actions Ã prendre en cas d'alarme si vous Ãªtes prÃ©sents dans la salle. Nous pourrons aussi rÃ©pondre Ã vos questions. Une deuxiÃ¨me sÃ©ance sera convoquÃ©e pour ceux qui ne peuvent Ãªtre prÃ©sents.
Remarks about the translation	Domaine ingÃ©nierie en anglais amÃ©ricain

Title	Server Room
Translation English Translated by babachiko	Target language: English You all have access to the server room with your magnetic card. You are called to attend a short briefing of approximately 20 minutes on the new gas-operated fire protection equipment in the server room. The objective of the meeting is to inform you about the actions to be taken in case of an alarm while you are in the room. We will also be able to answer your questions. A second briefing will be convened for those who cannot attend this one.
Remarks about the translation	I have dropped the specification "au gaz" and translated "incendie au gaz" by just "fire." It seems to me that "gaz fire protection equipment" would be a bit heavy.

Validated by lilian canale

- 14 September 2009 12:38

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		6 September 2009 14:23
	lilian canale จำนวนข้อความ: 14972	Hi babachiko, please complete your translation. The last line was not translated. Also: to the server room magnetic card information meeting ---> briefing on how to react if an alarm occurs ---> of the actions to be taken in case of an alarm
		9 September 2009 11:16
	Maybe:-) จำนวนข้อความ: 338	I would have translated the second sentence "Nous voudrions vous convoquer..." --> "We would like to invite you to..."
		9 September 2009 16:32
	Francky5591 จำนวนข้อความ: 12396	"la nouvelle installation de protection incendie au gaz" wasn't entirely translated, "au gaz" isn't translated "sÃ©ance" : "session" Rest is ok IMO
		9 September 2009 16:42
	babachiko จำนวนข้อความ: 11	Just to say I got the suggestions. I'd love to incorporate'm in the translation, but the internet interface is a bit intricate and I didn't manage to access to an editable text. Too bad.
		9 September 2009 16:50
	Iserb จำนวนข้อความ: 30	In the French version, "Nous voudrions vous convoquer" contains the idea that attending this briefing is compulsory. I'm not under that impression when I read the English version. May I suggest something like "you are asked to attend" instead of "invited"?
		10 September 2009 13:42
	etater จำนวนข้อความ: 6	"..you are invited to attend.." "...the aim of the meeting will be.." "..a second briefing...for those who cannot attend the first.."
		11 September 2009 08:56
	babachiko จำนวนข้อความ: 11	I basically agree with the remarks made. I am an engineer, not a linguist; it is probably better that I don't get involved in this site. Now when I try to incorporate your remarks in the translation I get the following message: QUOTE DÃ©solÃ©, la traduction est en cours d'Ã©valuation et vous ne pouvez pas la modifier. Toute modification que vous souhaitez apporter doit Ãªtre postÃ©e via l'envoie d'un message. UNQUOTE. Good luck to you all!
		11 September 2009 08:57
	babachiko จำนวนข้อความ: 11	Btw it should be "via l'envoi d'un message"