Translation - Turkish-English - Her yerde dolaşıp seni aradım.fakat bulamadım

Hi Bilge Ertan

In what way can this translation be improved?
Thank you!

It can be improved in many ways, do you mean in a poetic way or something?

No, don't worry, as far as I am concerned, the text looks fine

Bilge Ertan has replied (in the poll) that she thinks the translation is almost perfect but can be improved so I would like to hear her suggestion

Oh, okay. I thought the message was for me

Hi and sorry for being late

I replied in the poll like this, because I think the act of looking for sb is finished. Maybe we could say " I (have) looked for you everywhere, but I couldn't find you." It's just a little difference and not so important.

In addition, we don't see the word "dolaÅŸmak" in the translation. Here is my suggestion :

" I have walked around and looked for you everywhere, but I couldn't find you. "

Thanks for asking for my opinion.
See you.

Hello again yeneruver

Bilge Ertan has suggested some small changes. Do you agree? Let me know and I can edit, if necessary, and accept the translation

I agree, you can change

Thanks! Nice working with you