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hafif formulÃ¼ gÃ¼ndÃ¼z kÄ±remi iÃ§eriÄŸindeki cilt...

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hafif formulÃ¼ gÃ¼ndÃ¼z kÄ±remi iÃ§eriÄŸindeki cilt besleyiciler ile cildinizin ihtiyacÄ± olan bakÄ±mÄ± saÄŸlayarak saÄŸlÄ±klÄ± ve parlak bir cilde kavuÅŸmanÄ±zÄ± saÄŸlar cildi farklÄ± katmanlarÄ±nÄ± nemlendiren ve tÃ¼m gÃ¼n nemlendirme saÄŸlayan avon daily skin allowance kompleksi cildinizin yumuÅŸak ve pÃ¼rÃ¼sÃ¼z olmasÄ±na yardÄ±m eder 15 faktÃ¶rlÃ¼k gÃ¼neÅŸ korumasÄ± iÃ§erir.

Title	The soft formulated day cream
Dịch English Translated by cheesecake	Target language: English The light-formula day cream with its skin nourishing ingredients, ensures that you attain healthy and bright skin by providing the maintenance that your skin needs. The Avon Daily Skin Complex moisturizes the different layers of the skin and provides moisturizing the whole day, with SPF 15, helping to make your skin soft and smooth.

Validated by kafetzou - 18 Tháng 1 2009 17:15

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	Tác giả	Bài gửi
		6 Tháng 1 2009 01:04
	kafetzou Tổng số bài gửi: 7963	For "hafif", I would say "light", but then we get into trouble with the syntax. Maybe "The light-formula day cream ..." Also, the last part should be "SPF 15", so maybe like this: "The Avon Daily Skin Complex moisturizes ... and provides ... with SPF 15, helping to ..."
		6 Tháng 1 2009 09:47
	cheesecake Tổng số bài gửi: 980	I don't know what SPF means I mean I have never heard before. I guess sun protecting makes the meaning more obvious to let people understand
		6 Tháng 1 2009 17:01
	kafetzou Tổng số bài gửi: 7963	SPF = sun protection factor We always use this abbreviation for this in English.
		18 Tháng 1 2009 00:52
	cheesecake Tổng số bài gửi: 980	I guess no one has any more comments about this translation Kafetzou, maybe you would like to check it.
		18 Tháng 1 2009 00:55
	kafetzou Tổng số bài gửi: 7963	You haven't made the corrections I suggested, cheesecake.
		18 Tháng 1 2009 00:58
	cheesecake Tổng số bài gửi: 980	Its done now.
		18 Tháng 1 2009 01:21
	kafetzou Tổng số bài gửi: 7963	Not quite: provides you to --> ensures that you with the skin nourishing in its ingredients --> with its skin nourishing ingredients ( and this should be moved to right after "The light-formula day cream" ) 15 SPF --> SPF 15
		18 Tháng 1 2009 01:30
	cheesecake Tổng số bài gửi: 980	It's done. Is it wrong to use "provides you.." like that?
		18 Tháng 1 2009 02:55
	kafetzou Tổng số bài gửi: 7963	It would have to be "provides you with", and then it would have to be followed by a noun, not a verb.
		18 Tháng 1 2009 02:55
	kafetzou Tổng số bài gửi: 7963	Actually, you still need to take out the "to" before "attain".
		18 Tháng 1 2009 13:24
	cheesecake Tổng số bài gửi: 980	OK, it has been done